I'm usually not a huge fan of 2014!verse fucd, but this has Claire & ever since I displayed as her, I've become attached. I think she'd be a year or 2 older than that, judging from her age now in 2016, but I enjoyed the scene.

-SQ

Ah! my heart! I think this story that made me the most emotional I've been in a VERY long time.

Actual tears. Uuurghhh, stuff with Claire gets me but Endverse and her with Cas? I'm a goner. Your writing is magnificent, by the way. Every fic I've read so far has not disappointed in the slightest for quality and characterization and emotions.

This...made me cry. Oh god, it was like watching Wesley die all over again. The same kind of situation...and Cas was just plain awesome, and Claire, and...this just broke my heart because it isn't fair to all three of them. This deserves far more reviews then its been given. Brilliant job!

So I have only one question here:

Why aren't the reviews for your stories all in the triple digits?

I'm no idle flatterer, but I'm not going to pretend that I've ever come across a better author for Supernatural. You have a /serious/ gift, and it's pretty ridiculous that more people on here don't realize that. I haven't checked your LJ link, but I hope you're epically popular over there, because otherwise, this world has some lacking tastes in literature. Everything I've read from you is wonderful.

The subtlety in this is fantastic: you can /feel/ how worn-out the characters are and how much they just want to collapse. Claire is just outstanding, and her story about Saturday mornings is pretty much my new headcanon for Jimmy. Cas's metaphor was an absolutely perfect explanation of why he stuck around. And then the pretending and the snuggling are such weird, painful moments. The closing lines are the only way to finish properly, because it's just the same cycle, starting all over again.

So, yeah. I just thought I'd pop in to re-analyse your story for you. ;) Write more. Maybe someday, the people on FFN will understand what a good story is.

aw-www, this was so bittersweet. Loved it and hated it!