Oh my goodness! Even though I have watched all of Dragon Ball series and know the outcome, your story still makes me wish to read more! Kudos!

So subtle Vegeta...

Omg i obsolutely love this fanfiction, I don't know if you still plan on updating the story but i sure do hope so. I'm a huge goku x chichi fan and we dont get to see fanfics so well written of them often, i hope this continues

I first read this story about 5 years ago.. I fell in love with it instantly. I was so hyped when I found out you updated it! I'm hoping you'll finish it soon.. ~ Lady25

Anyone else read Krillin's dialogue with the Tfs voice?

Loved this! One of the best Chichi stories I have ever read!

Ah, the birth of Gohan and Goten. I love reading these stories. You know Goku was a mess panicking, “What do I do? What do I do? What do I do?” I laughed so hard at the image of Nimbus crashing into the hospital. I know this wasn’t the way Goku wanted to see ChiChi but their moment together was sweet and at least it won’t be as long as they thought. Seven years is better than fifty but still I cringe at King Kai forbidding Goku from looking.

I can see Goku being concerned at how big ChiChi is getting and he should get thrown out the house each time he comments on it. LOL! Seriously, I don’t think Goku is jerky about it. I think someone like Goku who is used to certain things like a child expect things to stay the same or how he’s come used to things being. He was probably ready to have sex with ChiChi again after Gohan was born but had to impatiently wait. Can you imagine Goku ready to jump ChiChi as soon as she put Gohan down for a nap? LOL!

Oh, that cave scene. Another moment that should’ve been in the manga or at least implied. If Sailor Moon could imply it with Usagi and Mamoru why not Goku and ChiChi. LOL! With Goku being the free spirit he is, I can see him convincing ChiChi to do it anywhere. Outside in a cave, in the backyard, the forest, in every room in the house. Sometimes I wonder about the hospital when Goku only had a cast on his arm and feet. There’s enough movement for them to do something. I like that you show Goku can get jealous and possessive, too. That salesman is lucky to be alive. Goku being that way at times is realistic to me. Just ties into his loyalty to ChiChi and how he expects it of ChiChi, too

One of the things I love about Goku and ChiChi is that they would be loyal no matter what. I don’t think Goku would take it well if ChiChi moved on no matter how many times he leaves her. It’s just not in ChiChi to move on. She had been waiting for him since she was twelve. The scene with Vegeta and ChiChi was hilarious. They should have more moments together that’s not shippy. I can see him knocking the door down, barking and making silly claims. I can’t believe Vegeta took all the cookies! LOL! Greedy Saiyan! Way to go, Vegeta, leaving ChiChi shock that Goku knew she was pregnant and spoiling she’s having a son. She should've punch him for that, too.

Making kisses. Goku is so adorable! And his eagerness to do it again by taking the sheets from ChiChi. LOL! So cute! To be a fly on the wall that night, I would give my year’s salary. LOL! I always love the last look of Goku and ChiChi in DB. To me, Goku looks happy but nervous because he knew ChiChi was gonna jump him the moment they were alone and ChiChi’s expression said, “You’re mine.” It's nice to see Bulma and ChiChi have a friendship in this story. Lord knows ChiChi needed a friend and I always side eye how Goku's friends treated ChiChi in the series.

I know ChiChi gets blamed for Gohan slacking off his training to study in those seven years but I always thought it was Goku’s death that killed Gohan’s desire to keep up his training. Gohan did blame himself for Goku’s death and I think that really affected his desire to train. ChiChi training Goten and not even telling Gohan about it says a lot. I really like how you showed Gohan checking on his Mom. I think Gohan was closer to his Dad than his Mom when Goku was alive but during Goku’s death is when Gohan and ChiChi really bonded.

ChiChi’s response to Goku dying is just heartbreaking. Her collapse just said it all in the manga and anime. On a shameless note, how many times did Goku and ChiChi get it in before he left her? Wow. In my twisted mind, I imagine they spent a whole day in bed one of those days they were alone.

We were totally robbed of a sweet Goku/ChiChi reunion when Goku came back from Yardrat and Goku explaining himself to ChiChi for staying away another year. I bet she did shut it down for them when she was smack into the tree! LOL! I did enjoy Goku groveling and working his way to seduce ChiChi. I know some people don’t see that from him but I can. Goku has different sides. If he can be happy and clueless in one moment to serious fighter the next, he can be lustful and seductive to his wife.

If only DBZ was that type of show, we would’ve gotten more insight into those last days before the Cell Games. I doubt Goku could hide his feelings about the Cell Games the entire time and ChiChi saw his concerns. In my head, I always thought ChiChi suspected Goku was gonna die. Goku kicking their kid out and wanting to spend his last days with her instead of both his wife and son was really telling. I love the idea of Goku smelling ChiChi's scent and becoming crazy with lust. I doubt a yelling ChiChi stands a chance against Goku like that.

This flashback should’ve been in the manga or anime. It’s an example of a gold mine of stuff that happened in those five years. Poor Goku sneaking out to eat when ChiChi’s cooking wasn’t enough. LOL! I really like the sweet bathroom scene.