I'm not sure whether to die from the overwhelming amount of cuteness of from the deluge of sadness. This was wonderfully written, I'd always pictured the Doctor as a father, it suits him too well. I applaud your magnificent work. I enjoyed this story very much. Excuse me while I cry my eyeballs out.

Wowzers, that was so adorable. I hope you write more. I like little other Amelia and the Doctor's fluffy adorableness :D

:(...Amelia was adorable...but the whole time I thought you were hinting that Amelia was really a young River...now that would be just fabulous.

Oh my gosh. That was so beautiful. And brilliant. And funny. And heartbreakingly sad. Please write more of this. Write more in general, because your writing is so amazing. Stunningly spectacular job with this!

I really liked this story. I hope you will continue it. I am not a writer, so I don't feel qualified to critique or give advice about another person's writing. What I can tell you is that I was very engaged in the story, and I really want to know what happens next. Also, I got all the way through the chapter without realizing what (I think, might) be going on, and then a while later, I found myself having an "ah-ha, ooooh, of course" moment, and I think I see where you might be headed with this. Anyway, it was alot of fun to read and again, I hope you will continue it. Thanks for sharing ;)

I'm going to cry!

I really hope this isn't a one shot as I don't want to leave this happy Doctor and the sweet Amelia. I really want to know Amelia's story as she's written so lovely. Beautiful words !