| Reviews for Fathers' Day |
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Bee chapter 57 . 1/17 This was an absolute pleasure to read so wonderful. I love the slow take to their relationship. So so sweet and love your Abby and Gibbs. Worth a day spent reading this gem. Thanks so much for sharing off to read your other stories this is by far my fave Gabby story |
Guest chapter 37 . 10/27/2017 Abby canonically doesn't give a shot about Mchee's feelkings - she proved that in quite a few episodes - except when she wants to use him for something. Why are you pretending she would now? |
chymom chapter 57 . 6/13/2016 I was kind of scared to start reading this story. I love love love Abby/Gibbs I was just not sure where it was heading. But I love love love this storie. Saying that I want to ask a few questions I bet you've been asked already. How are things in Stillwater when they go back? How dose the team react at first to Abby/Gibbs? How's Abby mom find out about the couple? Do the outlaws act different after Kate-Ann is born? How did they handle their jobs when one of them was put in/on a tuff spot? Did it ever come down to your job or your partner? Was one of them hurt to get the other one? How'd the team react to Kate-Ann when she came into this world? How and where was she born? What were her party's like? How was/is her first friend? How'd Gibbs do with her birth? How'd Gibbs do with her life? What happened next? What happens when Kate-Ann gets hurt?(physical and emotional) Does Ducky help with care for little Kate-Ann? Is Ducky grandpa duck? So many questions love your writing! Off to read more. Thanks so much for sharing this! |
iagrl1223 chapter 57 . 2/29/2016 it took me a whole day to read this but it was so worth it. I just couldn't stop. thanks for such a great story |
GONEiam chapter 57 . 3/30/2014 This is such a great story! I like the ending, it's just perfect! Great job! :) |
Katie4384 chapter 24 . 9/15/2013 "Well, I found one of my socks down there..." Abby reached up a hand and he helped her up. "It was tangled up in your boxers, which just goes to show that my socks are trying to get inside your underwear just as much as their owner is." *laughs like a maniac* This whole chapter left me with muscle aches in my stomach from laughing so hard! This is totally Gibbs and Abby! You got them spot on! I love it! The fact that they can be hot enough to thaw ice in Antarctica one minute, and then be bantering back and forth like a couple who has been married for 45 years...So totally them! Love, love, love it! |
litbitnurse87 chapter 57 . 6/23/2013 I love this story not rushed thank god any chance at a sequel ;-) |
hslacer chapter 57 . 4/18/2013 Just finished this one. I live how you mingle the real with your fantasy. |
Katvonsat chapter 57 . 2/6/2013 I loved this story! :) I agree with you about the ending, but if you do go through with those last eight years in another one it'll be awesome And out was not a bad ending, it was incentive for another good story. I really liked that you didn't rush the story, even if you kept saying out was supposed to end sooner XD |
booknerd0426 chapter 26 . 1/17/2013 What are the ages of everyone in the story? |
jjd022980 chapter 57 . 12/20/2012 Love love love this one! From beginning to end just awesome! |
lori51 chapter 57 . 10/15/2012 There's no way I can list everything I like about this story, as I like everything about it! But I'm not ready for it to end! It's just too good! :D |
Ziver69 chapter 57 . 9/24/2012 Nooooo, I don't want it to end. Okay, tantrum over. Love everything about this wrap up...here's my list and I know I will miss some because well, it would be way to long to list all of them so here's my top list...They're married, they have a daughter and now a son on the way, they named her after Kate and his mom, they're carrying on the Father's Day tradition, Maggie and Jack are still together and there with them, Tony is with Leyla and Amera, The whole team are godparents, the baby boy's potential name, that Kelly and Shannon are such a big part of their lives, especially Kelly and Katy-Ann, and the way Gibbs and Abby got married...and of course, the love and happiness that's so evident between them. Can we please have more now? |
Ziver69 chapter 56 . 9/24/2012 Oh my word, you just turned me into a sappy puddle with that first part. The two of them laying together like that, just talking and touching,letting one anothers presence ease away the tension...now that's amazing. Love that Abby see's the man he used to be, the man he keeps locked away to protect and that she see's he's coming back. Also very happy that she recognizes her part in that and then when he says that guy is nearer the surface because of her...ugghhhh, a puddle of mush am I. And whoaaaaa, that next scene was out of this world H-O-T! I can't even describe it well enough. Abby pushing him against the wall and then the checking for tics, but when he flipped her over-*bag! I NEED a paper bag down here!* And they weren't even done yet! That whole checking her for tics and choosing the next tat and the the fingers and the curling and the *Where the hell is that BAG?!* Gibbs asking her to move in, the soulmate discussion and then Jack giving Abby that gift was so beautiful. |
Ziver69 chapter 55 . 9/24/2012 *Shakes finger at you* No fair, nearly stopping my heart with mentions of forearm at the very beginning. How am I supposed to get through the rest of the chapter if I'm a boneless mess at the bottom of the gutter just several sentences in? Loved this line though, "Was gonna suggest together but if we did, I doubt we'd get to eat this side of midnight... and Jackson might hear me screaming."He bent his head to nip her neck, making her gasp. "No might about it, Abbs." So sweet to hear them talking about there lives in years to come...and the thought of grandkids-Awwwwww! The photo albums were such a wonderful way to tell more stories. It's great that Abby and Jack want to help each other bridge those gaps in time but they also understand Jethro's need for privacy and respect that. I loved the wedding story with Jethro and Shannon and I could so easily picturing being what really happened. Such a great chapter! |