Great story! Well done!

Amazing story, I hope you do a follow up to this one day. The Black Diamond and Atlantis together would be something really special. Great work.

Is it pathetic that I am such a nerd that I was reading your story and was actually giggling with glee?! Its been years since I have seen DS9 as it wasn't one of my overall favs but I did remember enough to throughly enjoy this. Have read a couple of your others and plan on reading them all. You have talent that stands out and I would encourage you to keep it up! Please. Thanks for the enjoyment.

not bad

Thanks for a really enjoyable story hon. Now watching fro your next one!

Oh, don't apologize! I enjoyed each and every chapter immensely! Your writing was great and each chapter left me desperate for more. I seriously got giddy every time my email told me you'd added another chapter. Fabulous job! [And wonderful whump of course ;)]

First of all I have to describe this entire story in one single word...OUTSTANDING!

This was a very pleasent journey for me and you are one heck of a good writer; please keep up the good work and hope to see more of your stories soon.

Thanks again pal for your story!

ah looks like the lost shep found home, good chapter, really good end

Thank you so much for winding it all up so neatly! I really enjoyed the story, beginning to end.

Y'know, Rodney (especially) is likely to be very curious about the similarities of Sheppard's new acquaintances to a certain television series... after all, they know "Wormhole Xtreme" was created as deliberate mis-direction for the Stargate program - what other program could be hiding behind a similar smokescreen? Hmmmmm... :)

Thank you again. I'll be interested to see what else you come up with!

I'm glad you did the final chapter with John making back to Atlantis! And Starfleet's claculations were spot on! I loved this story-very cool! It would be even better with a sequel with Salen and Razor visiting John in Atlantis once they get the hand of the stargate! Hint-hint!

vry good story so far, now lets see what use starfleet will do with the stargate, and i hope that comunications with the stargate universe can be estabelished, and share of thec between the Federation and earth stargate, that way both will become major players in the galactic events on both universes. Cant ardly wait for the next chapter /update.

Now for the wind-up... Sheppard's going to have a lot of 'splaining to do!

well looks like it is time to say good bye, good chapter a bit short but alright, as there isn't anything more to say.

That was a great chapter! I'm looking forward to more of this :D

So! They got the Stargate working-hopefully it will take John back to his time and the right Atlantis-at the right time! He sure will have a story to tell them! And he's Unwhumped-that's a first! Or do you have something planned?