Add more chapters? Please?

Oh, I'd hate to see Ser Jorah ever do this but what a great alternate ending if it did. Dany can't possibly hate Ser Jorah, surely not. He is only a man and pride has well and truly been his failing. Ah! I hope it all works out well I'm the books for them both.

Great fic. Really enjoyed seeing Dany rescue her bear from the pits. Really great divergence and very well written.

I was so disappointed when Dany and Jorah didn't come face to face in the fighting pit, so this story did a great job of filling my desire to know what would have happened if they had.

I want it to be canon!
Daenerys saving the day, aw.

Ah yeeeeah! XD When I read this passage in the book, I thought she was going to see Jorah, so this was really nice to read. And Dany was totally kick ass here! So glad she killed her awful what's-his-face-husband, haha. Awesome!

That was so cool. Go Dany and Jorah wooooooo

haha, thank you again for your message. ;) I thought about reading the books but Im not sure if I will start them. ;) And Jorah is supposed to be bad-looking? Okay, then they chose the wrong actor because I really liked him! xD

And dont worry, Im not sure if Im able to read all your stories today but I will try to start the ones where I know the fandom. :) Even if I dont get some of the things youre writing about, its okay, too. ;) Until now I had no problems understanding the stories and spoilers are okay, too, I guess. ;) (Im very forgetful anyway..xDD)

That Dany obviously doesnt udnerstand the whole bear-part, haha. Just like me. ;)

I already wondered about what Jorah said in the other story, that he would be her third husband and second lover, or something like this? So this is Danys new husband and she doesnt really trust him? Then she will be very glad to see Jorah again, because she knows and trusts him. But okay, maybe not so happy if shes going to see him fight. :(

(She always has husbands who like fights, hm?)

"Seeing your proud knight made to dance before the queen he betrayed?"

Okay, so somebody found out that he was betraying Dany and thats his punishment for it? :(

But even though Dany was betrayed by him, I really can imagine her to act like that. She cant forgive him right now but she doesnt want him to be hurt like that, too.

"Not for coin-for home."

well, and Dany knows how it is to miss her home. :( Ah, and that was what you meant by his wound on his cheek in the other story. Its a sign that he betrayed Dany and thats why he was ashamed by it.

"Nothing in the knight's stance indicated that he would do anything but go on staring at her with love in his eyes as the beast devoured him."

oh god, and I really can imagine him to act like this. :( because he thinks he deserves what is done to him.

"The slavers say they beat him till he was unconscious, but they only broke him when they told him you were wed."

oh god! :( Thats so sad and beautiful.

"Jorah's love for Dany had never been a secret, but it seemed she had underestimated the depth of it. She'd thought he loved his home more than he loved her."

Oh my.. :( I really loved the part where Dany tells her new husband that she is not gentle. I already liked that in the show because she really looks and sounds soft and gentle. No wonder she always feels the need to prove herself and others that shes not gentle. Well, and in the past she couldnt allow herself to appear gentle because she needed to be strong and hard to survive and be a leader.

B-but..that she attacked her husband here? (She probably didnt want to marry him, I guess..?) Wow, I didnt see that coming! and how immediately Jorah was by her side to help her and protect her like that, wow! :)