Something else I noticed. You’re having characters something, finish their quote, then IMMEDIATELY have the same character say something else in a new set of quotation marks with nothing between them! Why!? It’s ok if you separate them with a “Harry said” or “Voldemort said” but there is nothing there!

Sigh... ok I’m still going to read just to see if you do it again but... putting author notes in the middle of a chapter is so distracting. It just ruins any flow that was there.

I love the story so far

I must say, I do love the way you had Harry attack Bellatrix. It was marvelous.

A good amount of twists. I love the end result. Love this. Write on!

Loved this!

hey I like your story so far
but I have a question, how comes that Harry didn't know that riddle is voldemort? he already meet him in the chamber of secret, he knows who tom riddle is.

SQUEAK! I am squeeing so hard right now, that it just came out as a squeak instead! This is so cute, and I've been enjoying the ride. I'm kinda sad that I'm almost to the end. I'm probably gonna miss it. XD

What a good prank that makes! Ha! Lupin got pranked by Severus, Sirius, Bellatrix, and Harry! Pfft!

Wow.

The part with Draco (hand-shaking) was oddly touching. I don't quite know why.

Snape snapped? XD

That vow a big loop hole. Voldie could easily not agree with any of Potter's choices.

SIRI! welcome back

Great story.