I'm very disappointed to see what you did with Remy here. But, I'll go with it.

Here I am, reviewing your story and knowing you probably won't be reading it, but just in case: I love Remy and Marie together so much, I almost wish Logan was out of the picture! Almost.

Cool I live in Rhode Island :)

Kind of weird she basically screws his brother and his son...just not my cup of tea just a little to twisted and flat out unbelievable for me.

YAAAY! I LOVED IT!

Eep. Excellent from start to finish. You rock!

OH MY GOD! Too many emotions for only a chapter. You evil lady are Awesome!

Logan: your son's eating your cake.

With love (?)

Karma

Wow! An interesting twist on the story for say the least.

Daken I never read before in a fic, I like that!

I forgive you for using Remy in that shitty way, he never never would act like that. I know this is a fic buuuut I'm hurt! All the Rogans mess with the Romy in a way or another

I was completely sure about the baby, because with a baby it would be hard to end the Romy, unless Remy dies.

Love Logan in this chapter

This is the Rogan more Romy I ever read, love it! FYI I'm a Romy fan but also enjoy the Rogan's

I very intrigued how this story will end

To my favorites!

Really? You're going to do that to your readers? Amnesia is all well and good as a twist when you haven't had 10 other twists and/or roadblocks beforehand. There comes to be a point where it's obvious that you are throwing in obstacles to ratchet up the tension/angst and to keep your readers on edge. That's not a good writing strategy. The story either becomes unrealistic (and yes I realize the genre is sci fi, but each genre/story has realities and rules to it) or you cause your readers to become frustrated because it starts to seem as if you are impeding their reading.

So, I'm sorry to say (because I honestly did enjoy your story up to this point) but you've lost me. I can no longer consider reading, because I feel as though you are adding in adversity for adversity's sake and not because that's what the story requires.

I do think that you are a good writer in most aspects - you just need to discover where those breaking points are and not cross them. Of course that's difficult as it is somewhat subjective - what might be a breaking point for one reader might not be for another. That said, I do believe there are inherent breaking points in the story that align with the general populace, if not with everybody. Good luck to you in your writing, I hope that you keep at it.

Okay, so the story is interesting and all, but why the heck doesn't she use her powers? She could easily take him down by sucking him dry when he touches her. Especially since she has control of her powers. The story could be so good, but you kind of ruin it with that mistake. I understand that you are probably do it for the sake of the plot you have in your head, but then you need to come up with a reason for why she isn't using/can't use her powers.

Nooo, I want them back together. Please.