Next please.

When are you going to update?!

gosh, next chapter please...

hey there. i remember reading this story till chapter 3 or somewhere there a long long time ago, bookmark it to read it later but i just forgot. :-P
glad i found it again! and its like, what, 2 years already? wow. maybe you should rush your update a bit there ;-)
is the one in his dream is the black cat? being clue-less here!

Ok. What the hell was that? I don't get how you think Asami reserves the right the call Akihito a 'slut' when all poor Akihito was doing was being as well behaved as he could be for the bastard. You know what really bugs me isn't that Asami said it. He's a bastard who would say something like that. But what you wrote after that juts made it all seem ok, like Akihito is just supposed to shut up and take it because he IS Asami's pet.

Akihito, as you have been writing him, and as he is in the manga, is not some spineless uke. I hate that you just glossed over the fact that Asami thinks so low of Akihito by having Akihito just accept the trash that Asami was talking.

You already degraded Akihito by insinuating that he can't have a proper relationship with Asami due to them both being men. You put Akihito in female garb and make Asami fall over himself due to some make up and a pretty dress completely ignoring the fact that Akihito is and always will be male. Are you trying to say that he's not good enough for Asami as a man? Cause that's what it sounds like to me. Latfiyah too. She seems to be there to be the little voice in Akihito's head telling him that he's not worthy of Asami. In fact, thoughout your previous chapters you've painted a picture that Akihito is not worthy of Asami because he is male. In fact, you seem to think that since he is the 'uke' in a gay relationship he must be treated like a 'woman' and you have a pretty archaic understanding of a woman and her 'role' in a relationship. I understand that you are portraying Moroccan life, but seriously? Why is it Akihito who is forced to change who he is? Some comments have said that it is romantic. I cannot see it. I cannot see how some make up and a change of clothes making Asami treat Akihito as if he were some doll is romantic in the slightest.

Mostly, I'm really disappointed that Akihito did not fight back. You are seriously letting himself degrade himself as a human being by being in a relationship where he is not recognised for the very person he is. Are you really writing a piece where Asami treats Akihito like a woman? They are men. This is yaoi.

I really enjoyed reading this story ,your writing style and Asami and Akihito ...

Thank you!
I hope you are fine and get a chance to continue this :-)

All these stories we're really good. You really bring out how much Asami cares for Akihito in them. Wish I could see a drawing of Akihito dressed up like a woman.

Hi I just kind your fanfiction this morning and I think it's amazing. You left it on such a good cliffhanger! I wanna know what the pill was. It's been awhile since you've updated so I was wondering if you were gonna continue this someday? Either way love this fanfiction :)

Maybe like an idea like God of War or devil trying to possess him by using his nightmares against him. It's not just about the darkness trying to consume him. If he loses everyone will die. Once he remembers his dreams and hopefully that will happen in the next chapter, he will tell that to Asami. I think that will be a nice way to go for the story.

I want to know if the black cat was apart of it or not.

Please update really really soon. I want to see Akihito finally remembering his dream and his past dreams.

This was really good. Interesting concept and well researched and written. Unfortunately, it looks like you won't be finishing it, as it has not been updated since 2012. Pity, I liked the story.

hey! when the next chapter will be updated?

No! You get me hooked and then there's nothing past chapter 9. T_T I feel as if part of me has died, or how I imagine Asami would feel being deprived of his kitten. Please, please, please continue it!

Oh my Gods.. You HAVE to continue this story. This is so good and I love the plot, the way you write them - from Akihitos sulkiness (is that a word?) to Asamis protectiveness and care when the former is scared. Kirishima's Ill-take-care-of-you-even-if-you-dont-want-me-to. Its awesome. I hope youll update and that you havent forgotten this story. And who the hell is this icy person who Akihito keeps dreaming about? And when will he admit, even just to himself, that he loves Asami. Oh and what was Asamis answer to the: how many children do you want? He should totally look into that even if it is just to annoy Akihito.. Thank you for this lovely story. All my love and hugs and cookies from me