I like it how you throw in little pieces of their thoughts together and how you wrote them. This story is not a story, but it's touching and just feels right.
Thx so much for sharing!

Beautifully done!

This was lovely, very lovely indeed!

VERY nice - I love the way you incorporated that smile she gave Angela...

Thank you, everyone, for the kind words! I have been humbled and very pleasantly surprised by the reviews since posting this here. I am definitely considering keeping this up.

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This is a beautiful version of what happened that night. I have read many good stories here, and liked them, but yours feels right. You really mixed the emotions so well. The love making and emotions just flowed from one moment through the next. This was beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.

(This would be a great way to revisit the moment in the show.)

Truly beautiful. This is the tenderness we missed out on!

Great one shot! I though your characterization was very good and the premis worked for me. I look forward to reading any others you write.

Wonderfully done!

Lovely job. Well done :0)

Beautifully written. What a great first fan fic! Thank you for sharing, this was just delightful!