This is very, very well writen. I do hope you make another chapter! It would be awesome if this was longer than a two shot, maybe having chapters on their relationship and why it fell apart maybe? Anyways great job!

YES! Yes, yes, YES! You should TOTALLY write the next chapter in Chelsea's POV. I'm curious myself why she wanted space. So, I hope you decide to make this a two-shot, and if you don't oh well. Keep up the awesome writing, buddy!

Penny ToughGirl