Why was Steve so surprised to find out he almost died? Isn't that why they had the coin on him in the first place?

Myka was avoiding the area where Helena died? Wasn't she already there in an earlier chapter?

I just wanted to say that you did an amazing job capturing all of the characters mannerisms, personalities, etc. This was such a fun read. I can't wait to see what other fics you've written!

That was fun! I could have used more holding hands/each_other/whatever, but the end was satisfying. :-)

They are finally together! YAY! :D Great writing, as in the first piece, and really nice work with the characterizations.

Awesome :-)

So what I find so marvellous about this story is the fact that I dont read it so much as live it. You create living and breathing characters and you allow me to join their adventures that you seemingly effortlessly create. The places, the speech, the tiny mannerisms- all of these you have perfected in creating this wonderful piece of imagining.
I am gobsmacked at the intricateness of this story, and cannot wait for the next instalment.
What I think you might be unaware of, is the emotional journey you take your readers on, one moment I'm laughing and the next moments I feel like hugging or crying something just because it is all so perfect. Thank you.

Also finally got the right story.

Thank you for the brave act of putting out your writing. I am enjoying these stories very much. Cheers, NC

WHY

WOW! WOW! WOW! This story was SOOO AMAZING! I absolutely LOVE your writing! Your stories are just absolutely captivating!

Great continual to first story hope to read more ;)

Dangit, you made me cry! *sniffle* So, so beautiful. I wish I could find more elaborate words, but all I can say is that this is so, so beautiful.

I stayed up well into the wee hours in order to finish this last night, mainly because I couldn't actually find the will to STOP reading. I think that marks the sign of a good story perhaps better than anything else. And this is truly a wonderful one.

I would love to go through, chapter by chapter, and pick out every individual thing that delighted me, or moved me, or angered me, or just made me inconsolably sad, but I fear I might get carried away and end up just noting down every single sentence.

So I'll save you from such tedious torture. ;) And will settle for simply saying; thank you for sharing this. It was truly a joy to read. Now, onto the next episode in the saga!

Brilliant ending of episode one. That was so much fun to read, and now i want to rewatch the episode to see all of the differrnces. Anyhow, i am quite excited about episode two and cannot wait to see how you develoo Myka and HG further.

Brilliant ending of episode one. That was so much fun to read, and now i want to rewatch the episode to see all of the differrnces. Anyhow, i am quite excited about episode two and cannot wait to see how you develoo Myka and HG further.