Great! I think you had Sheldon spot on. Thanks so much

I loved this!

This was good.

I always like their dynamic and how you portray them like its canon. Great fic and i like their interactions :)

Sweet ending. You did a great job with the angst. Normally, I want to avoid unhappy endings, but this time I was kind of actually looking forward to seeing if you could restore their friendship despite Sheldon's lack of romantic feelings. You caught me completely by surprise.

Wow - what a fantastic one shot (perfect length by the way). I loved everything about it, from the sparkling energy of their fights to the unbearable sadness of her heart ache leading eventually to the seductive revelations of their feelings for one another. Great story.

A wonderful story that is as in character as Sheldon in love can ever be.

This is so lovely.
You have a great way with the humor as well as the longing and the romance.

Thank you for writing!

Oh man this was a bit of a roller coaster but his behaviour was sort of spot on.. not perfect but pretty damn close. Well done.

Good way to write Shenny, because Sheldon won't suddenly turn warm and fuzzy because Penny wants him, she has to work for it, you fell a bit short there and i personally think she should have put in more effort.

Also, you missed the others reactions - I know you feel that's a good way to end it, sort of like a school project, but when your writing a book it just causes anger, that wasn't an ends and it's like a chapters missing.

Somewhat negative tone on the story, you need to diversify more - More humor between the "angst" - Just writing angst is the easy way out - It hardly takes any skill and is often the sign of a bad insecure writer.

Not that your bad or anything, I quite liked the story, but that's what I would change.

Loved it! I especially love the long one shots and this one had it all. The ending was so sweet, a perfect start for them. Thanks so much!

Amazing. AMAZING. I'm relatively new to this ship, and everyday, I read yet another Sheldon/Penny story that is impossibly better than the last. If I manage to find one that is better than yours, I'll be very surprised. I can't IMAGINE them being more in-character than this.

And I agree with you. I don't usually root for non-canon pairings as fervently as I have for this one, but chemistry is chemistry! ;) Thank you for your wonderful story. I was entranced right to the very end.

Yay for happy endings.

YAY

Great story! Really enjoyed it. You're a very gifted writer.