this was a very funny and well written fanfiction. it was very eloquent but at some points i felt the vocabulary went a bit over the top. still, a very enjoyable and interesting read.

p.s. i'm about 90% sure that e. coli bacterium cells are prokaryotic.

how do you know if her lips are dry or not ? p.s .great chapie

no one i know would do that

Loving the Connor-Wally "bonding," if you can go so far as to call it that, haha. And Wally is so oblivious it hurts. Guess this just proves the guy can talk the talk but not walk the walk. I can't wait to see how this turns out. :)

great story

I loved this fic sooooooooooooo much! I love how Wally is so, what's the word, nervous i guess, and it makes him so adorable and loveable! Thank you, and well done! :)

You made the thought of giving bacteria to someone adorable. The story is brilliant!

Really great story! Love how Supeys advice was "girls like pretty things"
:D
Yes Wally, the way to winning a girl's heart is giving her bacteria.
love the spitfire!

That was awesome.

Who would've thought Conner would be so good at giving love advice ?

I'm practically crying at how wonderfully this is written. Everything is just so...SO PERFECT. D':

The dialogue is insanely brilliant, I envy you so much at how well you write the dialogue. I am almost in tears, I kid you not, this is one of the best fanfics I've read EVER.

I liked tht way more than I thought I would

I seriously had chills by the end of this. I still do. All my girl-feels exploded at once. And Wally- imitating John Cusack. I love them both! And of course he'd confess during a fight, it suits them so well. The oblivious kinds of love are always the best and most frustrating. Ahmigod you're awesome. Oh my god. Keep writing. Within your fingers is the gift of the gods.

HAHA so true about the eighties. and lolz about Conner being a love guru. Wally is so adorable in this and they are all so in character.

Laughed the whole time. This is beyond funny! XD