What about Choji in this chapter? You send Ino with Yoshino but not Choji...

Um.. you have probably been told this before, but unless Hatake-san is a oc the correct first name is Kakashi.

Love this story and can't wait to read more

Well, this is very interesting, I can't wait to see where you go with this

keep writing I like this story.
im making story called Teenage Kakashi.
im looking for Betta reader.

Those two phrases at the end do not equate. Practice makes perfect is taken literally. The other phrase actually equates to 'quality over quantity'.

...was that some kind of interrogation?

Ah. Was Hatake's parents a fan of Sakumo? That was his surename...

Nice fic. it's different.

:I I didn't even know that was a kidnapping.

Great story! Keep going. Does Naruto ever meet Kakashi? Or Sasuke? Will he be super strong/ smart? Please update soon!

Nice story and all, but I do not really get that move. Naruto gets out of his appartment into what is basically a prison cell (only without electricity) - thats a HUGE downgrade in living standard and seems more a punishment then halping him...

liking the story hope to see more soon

hmm. wonder why Inoichi wants to teach Naruto Psychology? Although I guess considering how few people he has been around, he doesn't know much about people I would think... Plz update again soon.

So, what happened to the mental examination? Naruto didn't need to know what psychology was in order to answer Inoichi's questions.