| Reviews for On Poor Timing and Slight Oversights |
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adsfghjkl chapter 1 . 3/5/2012 ha ha, lol. quite surprising that they even had names. bet light was thinking "OMG, I RIP A PAGE... AND THEN THERE'S ANOTHER PAGE! MAGIC!" or something. |
Lotta Devon chapter 1 . 2/13/2012 You know, that's such a random prompt, and this could have been a terrible fic. But it was actually hilarious. Really well written, I thoroughly enjoyed it! :D |
left and staying gone chapter 1 . 2/8/2012 So cruel to Light. Nice story. |
Eclipsewings chapter 1 . 2/8/2012 Could use more humor in it, but a very entertaining oneshot no less. |
plannedbyReaperLight chapter 1 . 2/8/2012 Funny! Aw, poor caveman!Light. |
missmafia chapter 1 . 2/8/2012 Oh my gosh, this story was perfectly hilarious. I loved how you included all of the characters and using Ryuk and the Death Note as the basis for the prompt was a brilliant idea! Your writing style is fantastic and I can't wait to read more from you. Of course, Mello makes everything fashionable, even thousdands of years ago. :'3 |