this probably isnt gonna be updated anymore but damn... just. damn.

omg this book is gonna make me cry aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

The most disturbing part about this entire fanfic is that it's not even fiction. This kind of stuff happens in real life as well, and you did a very good job of capturing those moments. This really is a work of art, and deserves much more attention.

I relate to this so much. I have friends, but...They don’t understand me truly. We are friends caus I’m there

This is utterly heart wrenching, I think I've cried for a solid 20 minutes while reading this. Such a great fic, tragic and terrible and so very deeply sad but very very well done.

This is probably the billionth time I’ve read your story. I really love it. It is the second best fan fiction (Harry Potter) that I have read, the first I am unable to find. I really wish you would continue every chapter is so detailed and sad, but in a way that I find addictive.

My gosh this was so dark! Keep it up!

Ouch, this hurts my heart...

I would recommend listening to ‘Echo’ by Jason Walker or ‘Spiegel Im Spiegel’ by Arvo Pärt while reading this.

It's a bit confusing , this chapter, but I guess that was intended, I wasn't sure what Luna was imagining and what really happened.

Mostly I just really want Cormac and some of those bitches to die.
It also strains credulity a bit too much that Ginny, if they actually speak at this point, haven't noticed anything. Not to mention that enough knows about the rape that it will spread further (even if not that it's actual rape) and someone who cares, and unlike Anders has a spine, should know at some point.

Absolutely brutal ending to this chapter.

This is heartbreaking but well paced.

Jesus Christ. I've been reading fanfiction for over ten years and nothing has hit me as hard as this story did. And you wrote it 6 years ago so it's unlikely that you'll read this, but that was a fascinating and terrible (in the sense of "terrible, but great") perspective into what might have been for Luna.

Fuck.

Thank you.

Your writing is phenomenal. You know just how to make your readers cry: and believe me, I'd know because I cry every single fucking time I read this. The "pink toad lady" makes me want to tear out my eyeballs, her father's reaction makes me want to puke, the letter to Ginny makes me curl into a ball and sob, and the terrifying descriptions of her schizophrenia give me nightmares and keep me up late into the night. You are meant for fantastic things; your writing has changed my perspective on Luna and what my own reaction would be to a situation like this. I do think the story is a tad dramatic, but that just makes it even more incredible. Don't listen to anyone who wants you to change something; the way you ended it was perfect, the situations are perfect, the writing is perfect, the EMOTIONS are fucking beautiful. This had made me more aware of myself and society, keep on changing the world!