| Reviews for Hail, Lord Perseus! |
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Demi-Wizard48 chapter 5 . 12/30/2019 They are only 9 mortals. Is Nico the 10th? |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/8/2017 NO! YOU MONSTER YOU BROKE UP PERCABETH! NOOOOOOOOO! ! |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/17/2017 He is actually acting like percy. I've read a lot of fanfic. where he doesn't. Like he chose Finland because he thought it would be nice to live there |
Krys chapter 4 . 4/20/2017 Percabeth |
PTJackson chapter 2 . 12/3/2016 If Percy is made god... what bout the claiming the children thing? |
Me the great chapter 2 . 4/6/2016 Are u stupid. Percy is the god of finland.? |
GoldenRabbit chapter 5 . 3/5/2016 Finnish is one language what I speak, when you write "Can I have my place in Olympus?" It goes something like that: "Voiko minulla olla paikka Olympuksella?" :) |
why chapter 2 . 3/6/2014 why finland? |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/1/2013 Can you write more of this fanfic I liked it |
wtf chapter 2 . 4/19/2013 wtf finland?! |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/24/2013 que?!pourquoi?! |
hiyoshi chapter 4 . 10/7/2012 dimwit... Back at the empire state building... so much for teleporting... |
Hiyoshi chapter 2 . 10/7/2012 I never get this point... If u can choose what god u wanna be why don't the first god just choose everything? |
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 5 . 7/15/2012 You really don't know anything about gods, do you? They are forbidden from interacting with demigods. They most certainly can't have an army, and why the he'll would Zeus suggest a way for another Olympian to gain more power that could end up with his downfall one day. Zeus is not that nice. Everything is too fast in your story. The descriptions are few and unclear. Mortals cannot get into Olympus. Why would Percy want to look like a twenty year old all of a sudden. He's sixteen. And the gods would not have consented in letting Annabeth become immortal upon Percy's request. The words you used were 'one condition'. You made it seem like the gods were so desperate to have him as a god and olympian. They were giving him a gift. He can't make requests like that. Changing how Rachel became the oracle made no sense. There was no reason or cause for it to be different. You described in first person how it happened, but then suddenly it was a shock when Rachel finally came down the stairs. So that MADD no sense. I don't know what you were talking about when you said Zeus had no sacred animal, but his sacred animal is an Eagle. And the way he acted, so wrong. There's no way Percy would be offered the chance to become an Olympian too. There's twelve and that's all. Zeuswould not give gifts to the other gods either. Dionysus got his sentence cut in half because Zeus was in a good mood. Poseidon becoming basically his equal? You've got to be joking. That would never, ever, ever happen! Hades has VIP acces o Olympus? That doesn't even make sense. Thalia and Grover's gifts were ridiculous as well. Why did you even bother with them? The gods are NOT generous. And Annabeth and Percy getting married? They weren't even a couple yet and they were still unsure of their feelings for each other. Suddenly they're married? That does not happen. As for Annabeth becoming immortal, did you even read the book? Gods can take immortal lovers. She can't be made immortal from a river. That's also not how gods become gods. Drinking from that river cleanses you and erases your memories. It does not make you a god. As for choosing his domain, why the hell did he choose Finland? That doesn't make any damn sense whatsoever. Oh, I saw a brochure of Finland once, so I'm going to choose that as my domain even though I've never been there and I know nothing about it. Gods are given their domains based on what they become gods of. And god of toilets? I get that you were trying to make it funny, but it really wasn't. It was stupid. Do more research, reread the series and double check you facts. Maybe then your stories won't be so stupid. |
EPICguest chapter 2 . 7/9/2012 FINLAND! FINLAND! Why Finland! |