Ohhh yay! I am so glad you included the the forest ponies and their unique back story of humans I do hope the next chapter will be certain to lead towards the beginning battle of the end

The author has to balance the stories out there are other POVs because it is what reveals what the others are thinking aside of the main character it gives you the full experience sure they can confuse sometimes even me but it helps you pull the entire story together in a 2 person or (pony) point of view lol

Also I don’t know some of the soft stories are good cause it gives you another type of view of the story but don’t worry I am sure he has more thrilling chapters coming soon

Wew every chapter breaks my heart little by little first rainbow now rarity...

HOLD ON! I just realized something it said that the emperor’s daughter was Meagen as in the Meagen in the past generations of my little pony cartoons you know as in the Grogar sent her away and the changelings once being fairy ponies was that supposed to be that Meagen?!

Sometimes it is nice to do those side quests you really know how to maximize the story please keep it up

Hmm I wonder who is next ? Yaks?

So you included Ember nice I so enjoyed seeing those dragons getting beaten to a pulp I can only imagine that LOL!

I really wish you wouldn't write this story like it's part of some kind of journal. It just disrupts the flow of the story whenever you change perspectives like that. Aside from a few small things, like that whole debacle with 'bestiality' and the OC clearly having issues with nonromantic affection (both giving and receiving), this story is proving to be surprisingly enjoyable so far.

...You know, it's very, very, VERY hard to get interested in a character when they stop, drop, and cry at the smallest (oftentimes imagined!) things that happen around them. Very hard indeed. I only hope that the [author-insert] character isn't such a crybaby in the next chapter, or I'm going to be quite disappointed.

Good work so far

Shoot! One more thing I noticed a typo when you said wide where you meant “wife”

Also I never thought Galleus would be out there I didn’t see that coming

I hope you are alright during all of this but I still do enjoy my favorite fan fic here and this chapter was both romantic and I won’t lie hilarious! Lol but still thanks for doing all this work

Idk sure you didn’t use mods in Skyrim LOL!