Omg..i absolutely love this!I wouldnt have never think of doing a back story like this for Zagi. I forgot that he really had a past. No one did but Thor and a bit on Third. I like this good thinking. I could see that as his back story. That would be something that would make him the way he was.

This is a great explanation! Yes this is the second time I've read it. :D Once again very well written. I am impressed by your skills.

"He's six. Of course he's useless." Loled at that line there! Such beautiful descriptions when Zagi was infiltrating the Dogs' base.

All in all a very good story! -applause-

Lera

Like this a lot! It was well written, and you explained Zagi's backstory well.

Keep it up!

-Aurora