UI don't know what you think or have to ask since my last review. If you have any messages that you wan to sent me about the characters I post, put it into Prismrain13's reviews. Doesn't matter which story, just send me something like if the characters are ok or not.

I loved it! I was hoping the girls would be shown again after Cons of Disney. You should make more little one-shots like this. I also liked the parts Jaq and Gus played. Good luck on the sequel, I can't wait!

This was good. If you're interested, I have a story idea for Tracy and Serena. What if somebody that got conned by the girls comes into Disney and is trying to find something or save someone. But she has to get help from the girls even though she doesn't trust or like them. Sound good? You can use it if you want.

Hahahaaa! :) I love it!

Now the heroes. Don't have to use all or any if you don't want to. Ask if you have any questions about anything.

First Character

Name: Kyra

Age: 15

Hair: Long, black, red highlights

Eyes: Purple

Outfit: Tan pants; light gray tank-top; dark brown boots; red hoodie; a sun necklace; brown belt; her right hand and lower arm wrapped in white bandages; and anything you want to add or take away.

Personality: headstrong, witty, kind, and tomboyish in some ways. (She’s the type of girl who could fight you even if you had her hands tied up, she then fights with her legs and head. And you can always count on her especially if to have your back in battle. My friend would say she’s like Max, but that’s not true. Kyra doesn’t get nervous in small places and she has no wings. Not to mention, if they were ever to meet, leadership chaos would erupt.)

Weapons: sword and archery bow.

Abilities: martial arts, shot arrows even while running, and whatever she can use to her advantage.

Relationship interest: Adrian

Important info: she has a monster-thing living inside her named Kendra and is trying to take control and join the baddies’ team.

Now the second character:

Name: Mark the Marten (he’s a ferret-like creature)

Size: similiar to adult cat

Fur color: dark grey

Eyes: amber

Tail: long & bushy

Appearance: whiskers; long, pointed nose; slender body; elongated nose and muzzle; and a red, tattered scarf. Maybe wears goggles, your choice.

Personality: sarcastic, friendly, funny, loyal, and a bit greedy.

Occupation: Mechanic and Kyra’s friend

Weapons: Teeth and claws.

Third Character

Name: Adrian (I name him that because it means dark one. The person that I imagine him to be, this name fits him. Just like Kyra name means sun-like which reflects on her)

Age: a year older than Kyra, so 16

Hair: Auburn (he does have bangs)

Eyes: Sliver blue, almost like the moon’s glow

Outfit: Black trench coat, not like the Organizations, more like Dustfinger’s, but it to the middle of his thighs. Black combat boots, black cargo pants, midnight shirt, gray fingerless gloves, and a moon ring (not to be confused with a mood ring, it doesn’t change color.) Add or change anything ya please.

Personality: mature, usually calm, a silent type, clever, rarely shows emotions with expectations (like being around Kyra), good guy, brave, and wise.

Weapons: Two Khopesh (curved swords used in ancient Egypt)

Abilities: Appear as suddenly as he disappears, come up with strategies on the spot, and dodge rapidly.

Relationship interest: Kyra (they are a couple, but not like a lovey-dovey googling eyed kind. They are more realistic, but still do romantic stuff. Like fighting bad guys together. He’s the Yin to her Yang)

Fourth character

Name- Garnet. (Kyra’s brother)

Age: 14

Hair-dirty blonde.

Eyes; Forget-me-not blue.

Outfit-grey pants, blue shirt, dark-grey jacket, and white sneakers with red and black lining.

Personality-Quiet, quick, and sneaky.

Weapons-Slingshot and dagger.

Abilities- can sleuth so greatly that no one can see him, master of sneak/surprise attacks, blend into any scenery, and fire rapidly with a slingshot.

Fifth character

Name- Luke (Kyra’s other brother)

Age-16

Hair-brown hair.

Eyes- dark indigo.

Outfit-fingerless gloves, black sleeveless shirt, blue jeans, grey boots, wrist band, and short-sleeved navy jacket.

Personality- comical, reckless, and good sense of right and wrong.

Weapons- Knives and a machete.

Abilities- Throw knives multiple times at enemies, nifty with Machete, and able to distract enemies with rude/annoying remakes.

Ok, I did the best that I could and made some villainous profiles. They may not be the best or seem bizzare. So, you are free to change and delete whatever in these profiles. Two of the three could be minions, but the top one can't and I based the first one a bit from Lord Ombra. But this is fan fic so it's not that bad. I am planning on sending in hero profiles, but not with this. And if they don't fit with the idea you have in mind, either feel free to change them or don't use them and either ask me for a better one or use someones else's. Don't worry, I can take the critisim. Well, here they are:

First Villain

Name: Dia-Bler or Malovent (I couldn’t decide so decide for me)

Other names; the terror of mankind, the nightmare of the innocent, the scourage of God, and the Source of all Evil."

Minions- demon-like beings that can switch from solid from to shadow form—Barek—Shawn (maybe)

Powers: Appear and disappeared in wisps of black and red shadows.-Presence brings an awful chill below 30 degrees.—Shapeshifting—produce and send visions (they’re not good, though in the evil sense)- Immense dark magic at his disposal

Weakness-Hates purity and light, pixie dust, anything that contains light and goodness or is a symbolization of love from someone else burns him.

Appearance:

A Blacker-than-midnight, tattered at the edges cloak covers his entire being, save for ashen-gray, claw-like hands, nails chipped and yellow

A raspy, hissing voice

Irises-sickly yellow Pupils- blood-red

He’s not human even through his form is like one

Personality: Malovent, icy, serious, not comical in any way, malice, cunning, manipulative, persuasive (that’s how he got Shawn to work for him), cruel, mysterious, and pretty much a very bad dude.

Like Maleficent and Chernabog, he’s an incarnation of pure evil

Goal: Whatever you have or to plunge this (the one in the story) universe into everlasting darkness and death, not a shard of life left.

Second villain

Name: Barek

Occupation: Warlock, Former boyfriend of Kyra

Eyes: Black

Hair: Black

Age: 17 even though he lived for like 50 years

Powers: Immense knowledge of magic, dark magic

Personality: Bad-dude, deceptive, arrogant, cruel, violent, ruthless

Weakness: Gets mad too easily, mostly by good people

Goal: Out to find Kyra and her brothers, kill Adrian, and unleash the evil demon that’s trapped in Kyra.

Third villain

Name: Kendra, a demonic-being in human form

Age: ?

Eyes: Red

Personality: sadistic, blood-thristy, manic, evil, merciless, crazy, sly

Power: Powerful fighter and deceiver

History: Got transferred into a living vessel she choose when she was on the brink of death

Goal: Take possession of the will-power of the body and rack havoc.

Hi! Big fan of these fics. :) I'd love to make the side-kick, if you wouldn't mind- just let me know what the villain's like so I can make the perfect side-kick. *rubs hands together in creative glee*

Aw, cute! So you going to have a lot of these one-shots? Cause I think you should do one in Prydain. It'll be so cute to see them interact Gurgi. That little creature is so adorable that I could die. And what could happen is Tracy let Hew Wen out of her sight and she, Serena, Gurgi, and Taran search for her before Dallben notices. I could come up with a lot of ideas for one shots. Like the girls doing a training session at the Coliseum, sleeping over at the castle near Atlantica, learning fighting tactics from Mulan, helping Aladdin fight Mozenrath, and such. Oh, I love imagination. And the diabolical and awful villain, *laughs like Candace did in the first episode, one with the rollercoaster* I am more than ready to make. Just give me some time. I don’t get computer usage as much as you do.

Lol. This WOULD happen. Great one-shot!

Well, I love the story, so I'll be waiting for the sequel! But I don't have any ideas yet.

I can imagine this happening, definitely! Tracy always seems to make trouble for herself, and Serena always seems to get dragged in too.

Adorbs! I'm so excited for your next update! I'm literally peeing my pants reading this with joy and happiness and attempting to patiently wait for the sequel. Lemme tell ya it's not working quite well ;)

Poor Serena always gets dragged into everything...

But I loved it nonetheless! Ooh for your sequel, you should add a POTC section but I don't know if you want to stick to animated... Either or, you're a fabu writer and I cannot wait for more!

Haha. it's nice to see Tracy and Serena not running for their lives (sorta).

forgot two things one she has her hair in a ponytail two she wear's a skull pendent that look's like something from the terminator movie's even has lab made rubies for eye's to complete the effect

Good chapter i'm really looking forward to the sequel and maybe more one shot's. Now here a idea for a interesting sidekick for the villain

Name Sara

age about 8

look's appear to be of indian decent has blood red hair and eye's wear's what some people would call goth clothes black combat boot's that go all the way up to the bottom of her knee point black and blue stripped stockings black double layer skirt a simple black t-shirt with a broken gear pattern across the front and a leather jacket with white fur lining on the edges and cuffs with extra long sleeves that hide her hands just inside.

Personality Sara is a real mischeif maker and trickster love's causing trouble, playing prank's and making joke's at other peoples expence (like 625) also despite her age she is not naive

Skill's while she is a trickster her real talent lay in machines she is a real prodigy when it comes to either making them or repairing them

hobbies she enjoy messing with people causing trouble playing prank's making joke at other peoples expence and making all kind's of invention's and device's with her machine skill's

here's my idea for sidekick not what you usually find for that catergory but i think that make her more interesting she's the kind of villain that can be redeem kind of anyway she would still like causing trouble so she would be kind of a anti-hero or is it anti-villain eh either way i think she's a interesting character tell me what you think

Perhaps I could interest you in MY original character: Lord Odotherex. Former Antichrist, an exceptional swordsman, an expert marksman, a Dark sorcerer, a powerful alchemist (FMAB version), a well-learned politician, a devious warrior of psychology, etc. Basically the Ultimate Architect.

His personality consist of his manipulation over the weak-minded, his misanthropy, his immortal-purity bias, and his skills in playing differing sides to satisfy his needs; like his father, he is highly cunning and intelligent, making him able to convince his followers to do his bidding by making Faustian bargains with them.

His comrade is Ecthros, a servant who has mastery over the shadows. However, he can be viewed as the original stereotype of a minion, and yet he has a good heart that's just not shown when his master's around.

And if I may, perhaps you could add a different hero: if I might make a recommendation: my hero OC, the Knight of Renaissance Light.

Talk to me when you have the chance.