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Esta historia es genial el como Bella y Jasper terminan siendo familia

I love this story! Jasper is my one real obsession and I’m just as into Jasper/Bella family stories as I am Jasper/Bella romance stories and this one is so unique and though I’m a little irritated that I had thought I was the first one to do the family tree school project where Bella finds out she’s related to Jasper only to find you not only did it first but that yours is far better. (Thankfully it’s one I never finished or posted or I would’ve looked like a fool.) in my version Bella had been adopted and no one knew so when she got this assignment she was freaking out and Jasper comes to see what’s wrong. She explains and he offers to help her do the research so she isn’t alone and they discover the connection when he asks Bella if she knew her birth parents names (which she did) and after did coving her last name was Whitlock and him explaining what got him so excited, he explains and they dive into the research together and confirm its true. Bella de ended from his youngest brother, Matthew. Most of the story was the discovery and backstory, the emotions when both Bella and Jasper realized the Whitlock bloodline wasn’t all dead as they had believed and then opening up to one another about other things and starting to forge that deeper familial bond they had never been given the opportunity to develop because of the paranoia of Edward. After reading this I don’t even think I could finish mine because now every-time I think of the plot, I think of where you’re taking it rather then where I was-especially since mine was more of a fluff story and yours more how the connection effects the story itself and I think that’s honestly more interesting. I know it’s been a while since you’ve added to this story, but I’m desperately hoping you will finish this or if you have no plans to do so, to ask if you would be interested in giving me permission to finish it for you. (I’ve never adopted a story before & I have Lots of my own, but if you tell me what your plans were for this I will happily make this story what you planned it to be and make it the only story I work on until it’s complete. It can get posted on your account as well since it’s all your plot. Honestly I would much prefer your finished version then me adopting it, but if you’re either no longer into it, don’t have the time or are simply stuck, I just think a story this good deserves to come to a conclusion even if it is finished by someone less talented.

Loved it hope you update soon

Nice story, but I really can't imagine Bella being mad at Jasper.

Awesome story so far! Please continue!

i love this

please write more. I love it

PLEASE UPDATE NOOOWWWWW IM GOING CRAZY I NEED TO READ MORE IF THIS

lovvvvvvvve it please update

Please please update soon. I love this story

Ohhh badass Jasper! I love you! :)

Plz update

Love this story and can't wait to read more

Edward is speciest against shape-shifters.

What!? Why did you cut out the Newborn Army!? That's what sets the groundwork for the potential friendship between the Cullen Coven and Jake's Wolf Pack. Plus, it was the most interesting thing about the so-called Saga.

I sure hope Renesmee comes along. Lol, can't wait to see Jasper's reaction to Emo Eddie knocking Bella up, Hahaha, hehe. And Jasper will most *certainly* not take kindly to Edward trying to murder Bella's daughter in Rosalie's arms.

Jasper kinda has no choice *but* to allow Bella to be changed. The Volturi would kill her if the Cullens don't turn her. Butaybe Jasper could forbid Edward from doing it because of how badly Eddie the Emo Boy hurt her, hehehehe. :)