Good

I like it. I think it's charming.

Brilliant!

Thank you. This is actual, legitimate, QUALITY writing. Very in-character, very well-written, and very cute.

This is so perfect that I read it twice and each time it made me smile, my gosh, this is just amazing, I am going to stop typing this review to read it again. :3

Leave it to Sherlock to over analyze things and than have no idea what's happening until the answer is right in front of him. Very well written, you express these characters very well.

I usually don't like stories written in first person from Sherlock's perspective, but you did a decent job. I loved the science terms you interstates throughout. Good work!

aww, this is so cute, and it really sounds like Sherlock :) lovely

Beautiful C:

This was brilliant. Really, truly, amazingly smooth and engaging. Loved it; hope to see more from you! :-)

Ahahaha... Sherlock, Sherlock, Sherlock, you are the most brilliantly oblivious man I've ever hear of...

Love this piece. Your portrayal of Sherlock's thoughts as he comes to realize that John has been giving off signs that he likes Sherlock ("It's possible I've been a complete twat") and his inability to figure out what he should say is perfect. It's also really interesting to get a look into Sherlock's head in that tiny space of time after a case where he is content with the world...

Well written. Good read.

EEEP really, really good oneshot

You are a brilliant writer! you portrayed Sherlock so perfectly. and the ending made me fill up with fluff and warm feels. thank you for writing something amazing.

XD It's very difficult to get into Sherlock's mind during a story without ruining everything, but I'd say you're pretty close. It'll be nice to hear more from you in the future!

Great job! I would love to see this continued.