You should add another chapter to this and finish the deal, you're a good writer!

Muy bueno, escribe pronto, por favor.

This is amazing! Continue please?(:

Now, that was bloody brilliant.

A nice, sweet, short oneshot that made me smile.

I really liked it.

Keep writing awesome,

~Bookninja15 XD

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Please, do continue I love fics with John working with Rory, even if it's for a short time - there's not enough out there. It would be funny if John started becoming really good friends with the Ponds, and then when the Doctor comes back, John's there that Christmas, and he gets a bit depressed because Sherlock could never come back like that...I mean, where else would Amy get that jumper?

Remain awesome,

ZKL~

Oh I love this! You've got the characters down wonderfully. I'd actually really like to see more interactions between John and the Ponds, if you ever write any more please let me know!

This is almost funny. Almost, a little. Great job on the character voices.

I watched the video on your blog after reading this. You're not giving me any spoilers, except how it was filmed - I know the Sherlock Holmes story.