| Reviews for Burping Contest |
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Hawki chapter 1 . 5/10/2015 Yeah...cracfic is right. It doesn't help that the punctuation is off (e.g. missing commas, question marks, etc.) and whatnot. It's also hard to imagine Chi Chi being in a position of being bored, given how aggressive she can be. On the other hand, crackfic, I suppose. |
Major144 chapter 1 . 7/9/2014 Funny story. Nice twist with Mrs. Brife and I like the last line Vegeta says. |
LucyndirMoors chapter 1 . 1/20/2013 LOL I luv this XD |
iluvveggie chapter 1 . 3/27/2012 nice i like it espesgaly the vegeta and parts |
tapion580 chapter 1 . 2/10/2012 This made me laugh like heck! Plz do another one! |
10Rose4ever chapter 1 . 2/6/2012 Hehe, Vegeta. |