Wow! This was amazing! And I like your slight character development on Ryuga.

I LOVE YUU! HE'S SO CUTE! This story is adorable.

That was amazing.

Well... I can honestly say I was not at all disappointed with this story. It was well written, detailed, and interesting. I really like how you used such a small issue to lead up to Yuu meeting Ryuga. The whole thing was clever.

Calling them Forgotten Bladers was brilliant, as that is an intriguing name in itself.

Ryuga and Yuu seemed to be pretty spot-on with their description and personality. I feel you did an excellent job in bringing this story to life. It's not every day you find a story that's as well executed as I think this one is.

Can't wait to read more from you,

Mizune~

Well these last 2 chapters are outstanding! The description is excellent and painted a very clear picture in my mind of what was going on. Ryuga's personality was described very well, and even the recollection of the past events (like the battle with Reiji) were quite detailed.

Mizune~

This is a really good chapter. The beginning about Yuu being upset because he couldn't ride the rides at the theme park was an excellent way to set up the story for the following events. (I liked how you mentioned that the kiddie rides were as scary as OsamuXD

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Yuu's frustration was a clever way to start out the story, as it fit so perfectly to lead up to him getting lost and meeting another person, that he apparently knew. Good story, it was great to read.

Mizune~

Great story. I really enjoyed reading it, and when I saw that you updated, I was like, YESSSS!

Skimming this archive sure has its rewards :D

Please ignore my mistakes, I'm typing this on my mother's phone.

I have to say, this was an amazing read from chapter to chapter, and while at my cousin's house, surrounded by family, I would not put it down or be distracted from it. It drew me in so much.

It was just that great!

You Ryuuga fans do him such justice I'm nearly blown away, and you and your past story of him converted me completely to a full-blown Ryuuga fan!

If you choose to continue I'll be sure to keep reading, because this is really fun to read!

I'll also be sure to check out all of your other work as well!

Wonderful Job!

This was quite wonderful. I got back from work today and found this lovely chapter sitting in my inbox. It was quite the lovely surprise.

Your writing, per usual, is stellar. Your descriptions were much more in depth, more thorough. I enjoyed it immensely. You once again nailed Ryuuga. You make me love him even more than I already do. He's such an awesome character.

I also hope this story gets some for readers/recognition because I recommended and referenced it in one my stories. I hope you don't mind! I just couldn't help myself. It's so good, I felt others needed to be aware of it because I'm sure they'll enjoy as thoroughly as I do.

Keep up the great work, Juniper.

Chaos

LOL! Ryuga doing laundry!

This is fantastic!

Yuu is perfectly in character; so innocent and forgiving, just starting to grow up and come into his own.

And Ryuuga...well, he's absolutely perfect. The scene in the laundromat? Fantastic. It was so accurate and everything Ryuuga said was something I could actually envision him saying. I can't wait how to see how this turns out. Your writing is fantastic, you really know how to nail a character's depth and that of their thoughts. My only critique would be this: Don't be afraid to go into detail about surroundings, or people's appearance's a bit more. It adds a new dimension to a story and also gives the chapter a bit of substance, beyond dialogue(which you are fantastic at, by the way).

Other than that, I love your characters and the way you are portraying Ryuuga. A stone exterior to hide the roiling storm raging inside, all the while allowing us to sympathize with him as moments of his youth and lack of confidence shine through.

Wonderful job.

Chaos

OMG, I love this! When I saw Sora's name, I flipped a lid! I've always thought of Yuu as the Kenta to Sora's Ginga for some reason...

Amazing story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow, special fiction! I love it b'cause you use Yuu for the character and ...Ryuga too xDD

Are this story already finished?

If yes, make more fiction at this fandom please~~

And thanks for make this story. Bye :)