Reviews for Hitman Alchemist
rosev8960 chapter 29 . 6/15
Aw man, I wish there were more chapters
This was really good
Guest chapter 3 . 3/31
So what were these assholes gonna do if they weren't prosthetics?
This was awful of them!

All of them aside from Gokudera basically maliciously assaulted Edward in the span of one day. Flipping a heavy mat on him, intentionally batting a baseball into his leg (apparently with enough force to break bones no less!), and then stabbing him in the arm with scissors!? Yamamoto and Tsuna's "proof-gathering" ""tests"" are highly assault worthy charges with the police dude!

Ed shouldn't have been all "oopsies u caught me hurr hurr" it should have been more realistically "I guess exempting Gokudera, you all just bought yourselves detention for the month" at the very low least!
Hes been kind to Tsuna too! And he straight up stabs him! Wth man!

Also, Ed's supposed to be a genius, why/how did he not see the correlation between all the "lookalikes" suddenly coming up to him and asking for favors surrounding injury/touch to his automail in the span of one single day? Huge suspension of disbelief for that there.
on Xem chapter 29 . 3/10
pls continue this fic!
KuroHinata chapter 29 . 5/20/2018
Thank you for posting the part of the manga that I didn't bother to read and skipped to the last 5 chapters of the ending. hahaha. goodbye 4 years ago.
KuroHinata chapter 28 . 5/20/2018
Reborn really let me down here. He really didn't inform Tsuna of the Vongola's history. Even if he can't remember everything he should have discussed the main functions of the mafia, their allies, and sub families, and the responsibilities from Vongola and what is allies are responsible for. Or it is just because it was a manga that a lot of info are hanging and left to the fans to fill up. tsk
KuroHinata chapter 18 . 5/20/2018
Reborn really failed in preparing the girls. he is a sexist Italian mafia that expect the girls to play house tasks. They are made sure to stay weak to be protected and kidnapped target. why can't anime also show a girl being trained excluding the only heiress to a fighting family that needs to be hard ass.
KuroHinata chapter 9 . 5/20/2018
actually it has been 10 years and you just now found it suspicious because you're enemy called him a friend. what the fuck. enemy says, "hello, friend" everyone thought, 'enemy had infiltrated our group'. enemy, "mwahahaha, now they will doubt my friend". would make this review better with cartoonish
KuroHinata chapter 7 . 5/20/2018
I find them irritating that they expect a civilian to kill the one person who tortures him to become better. and they are giving him contradicting expectations. he doesn't want to be a mafia boss and they expect him to attain that mindset by killing someone for a trial which is not necessary life and death situation. in his heart he doesn't want to be qualified but need the qualifications to save the world. what a torture for him to gain a skill that will win him a position he really oppose to.
KuroHinata chapter 3 . 5/20/2018
wow reborn. you really are not the best to need all your student's help. just shoot him once and you will know.
APridefulSin chapter 29 . 4/18/2018
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justaislinn chapter 4 . 2/7/2018
How on earth could Ed and the vongola as a whole only be 100 years old?
Primo started things generations ago, Tsuna is the 10th boss, and the position is passed down from father to son. Whether the father lived to be an old man like the 9th or died young, they still had to be old enough to have children and the children old enough to inherent the position.
It can't be 100 years. It just doesn't work for the vongola timeline, though it does make more sense for the FMA one. Ed would have had to travel back in time to have been involved with Primo if you're keeping to the FMA timeline.
Write on:)
Eli Clark chapter 3 . 1/12/2018
I want Ed to be seen with his hair down more often. I love his hair!
Eli Clark chapter 29 . 1/12/2018
Poor Ed is so adorable. I want more action with Ed though, he's precious to me. One of my favorite of all time characters. I want him to have children. Maybe they'll get his flame. It could be called... Truth Flame or Alchemist Flame..? I don't know but it can't be fog since that's kind of like mist.
Chaotic Ghost chapter 17 . 4/21/2017
Beware... BEWARE! *says in ghost voice*
Conan Shinichi Lover chapter 29 . 5/8/2016
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS FIC! I HAVE NEVER SEEN SUCH AN EPIC CROSSOVER THAT IS THIS GOOD! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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