| Reviews for Kneading The Dough |
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   B Dizzy chapter 42 . 8/9/2016 If this comment comes across as critical I am very sorry, I think you ditched it anyway, I was totally into it mainly because I was curious of Gales deal.I'm used to him being a box full of douches,but after the wishing she's dead cuz she didn't want him or volunteer and the pushback that got Katniss gorged with an arrow, in which he ran away probably hoping shed drunk crap,the merchant crap,why exactly is she still hanging out hunting let alone kissing him when she has no the dart looks fishy I'm at 38 I know it's incomplete but I still don't get it,as tough as she is with the stupid crap Peeta did, I expected pain for explain, like I said I enjoyed it enough to read 38 I'm not going any further unless I get an explanation of what he's up to. Much love Dizzy out |
| HUNGER FOR THE HUNGER GAMES chapter 2 . 6/27/2014 i like the fist chapter |
| bacolodgirl chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 This was GREAT. Very well-written. (I know, you probably never check this page for reviews any longer. I'm such a late-comer to fanfiction) |
| MaidenAlice chapter 42 . 2/22/2013 it past half a yea worth of sundays... |
| TitanNegro chapter 42 . 1/8/2013 It's passed sunday...hell a year passed and no update T-T |
| TitanNegro chapter 22 . 1/7/2013 How The hell is Haymitch in 12 f he should be in the Capitol taking care of Kade? |
| Guest chapter 42 . 12/5/2012 I THOUGHT U WERE GOING TO UPPDATE BY SUNDAY! ITS BEEN LIKE A MONTHPLEASE UPDATE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP? |
| amarilis24 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012 Please update soon. your fic is awesome |
| Lakeycreek11 chapter 42 . 9/27/2012 Hey good story but can u please update!:) |
| Whisper and Friends chapter 42 . 9/1/2012 Awwwww! |
| friendly gal247 chapter 40 . 8/28/2012 You should write your own books because that was aaaassssoooommmmeeee! |
| Browniangel chapter 42 . 8/29/2012 Poor Peeta! I know he didn't want to hurt his brother but he needed to do something or Kade might have killed Peeta not on propose. Kade believe he was still in the arena and fighting for his life and Peeta was the enemy. I believe Kade felt so bad that he almost killed Peeta that is why he was got so sick. You have to love Leesa and how she really knows how to handle a bad situation without making it worse. You have to love how Aidyn is with Leesa and Peeta now has Katniss that he can adore just like Aidyn adore Leesa. You know Peeta will be worried about Kade and will help him in any way he can. Loved how you show the bond between the Mellerk family including Leesa. |
| EVERLARK.ALWAYS chapter 42 . 8/28/2012 awww like how peeta is helping kade get though it all, please update soon |
| Gina chapter 41 . 8/20/2012 Wheres the next part!? I'm hooked! You're so talented and this is such a good idea for a returning victor :) |
| imagine808 chapter 41 . 8/5/2012 Oh m gosh that is a major cliffhanger! I seriously ned to read more update soon. :) |
