| Reviews for The Story of Helga G Pataki |
|---|
Lee- ananz chapter 7 . 1/27/2018 Oh ... Oh , ooooooooh myyyyyyy goooooooooooood . PLEAAAAAAAAAASE FINISG THE STORY , I CAN'T TAKE IT , I SPENT 3 DAYS READING IT ! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT ENDED! AND HERE ! |
AtomicAdri chapter 7 . 1/9/2018 UGH. I hate it when there’s so much conflict because of miscommunication. I know it’s necessary for the story and that’s how kids are, but man is it frustrating! Lol. This is a really great story though. It’s very well written and all the characters seem totally in character. I hope you come back soon with another chapter! |
Ssgamer chapter 6 . 12/18/2017 "Hhphm Olga is such goody two shoes. She probably only sent you up here because she knows that I'm in love with you." And that was the moment She Knew She FUCKED UP |
Stardazzled8 chapter 7 . 5/6/2017 Hey, I'm back again *2 years later* haha, still reading this masterpiece. I really hope you update, I'm looking forward to reading the rest |
dvd123 chapter 7 . 3/12/2017 OMG! Poor Arnold! Nothing's going right for him! Everyone just keeps talking over him without letting him get his fair say. I hope he explodes in a fit of frustration. xD I love this story. You have the characterization and dialogue down pat. It honestly feels like I'm watching the show as I'm read and picturing along. |
LY3T chapter 7 . 8/19/2016 Are you going to finish this story? Have you finished this story? I need to know what happens next! |
Rory chapter 7 . 7/30/2016 I love this story so much! So excited for the upcoming chapters |
Djdnamd djsmz chapter 7 . 7/24/2016 So, if you wanna know, I'm binge reading on some HA! romance stories with Helga and Arnold that catch my eye and oh my dear lord JESUS! I'm SO happy I clicked on this one! I don't even know how to begin showering you with my gratitude for making this beautiful creation! I'm impatient for the HA! The Jungle Movie to come out next Thanksgiving, so reading this super OC story with a story really reincorporated like the true series, just warms my heart... Ah, I'm FANGIRLING so hard right now, you don't even know! I'm going to cry because I have to wait and be PATIENT - (which may I mind you, I share Helga's trait of pure impatience) and wait for the nail-biting chapter 8! Argh! Poor dense Arnold! Helga really nails on him! Why couldn't she have eaten more of those poisoness cookies!? LOL! I seriously just love your writing style.. And seeing that this story has been in the works for two years, I can really see vast improvements in how you fantastically present the story to your readers! So awesome man, cootos to you, be proud of your hard work! :D I really REALLY hope you update soon! No matter how long it takes, I WILL stay tuned. I must know how this story will show its cards, especially with comedic Arnie joining the party! X'D but for real, I understand the struggle on updating stories.. It's a lot of work.. The creative side isn't, but actually typing 10,000k words is just... ARGHHHH! P.S. I LOVE the way you potray and write all the characters, and I mean ALL, but especially Helga and Arnold. You just write them so flawlessly, the best I've seen actually. I really admire that, it takes true talent to accurately potray already made characters, especially complex characters like Arnold and Helga. And their interactions?! Omg they're the best, they're just so awesome and I can just FEEL their emotions it's just argh.. I'm rambling now ahaha! Thank you so much for making this, can't wait to read more! You're an awesome person and I hope you have a great day/night! :D |
KoalaSnatcher34 chapter 7 . 7/21/2016 AT LAST! YOU UPDATED! You're making me feel wayyy too many emotions in this story! My heart sank when Lila said she didn't want to be around Arnold, I couldn't stop laughing at Gerald's bubble butt, and I was creeped out by Arnie (he's just weird). Also, I'm really feeling for Helga right now. Please keep the chapters coming! |
starfiction123 chapter 7 . 7/21/2016 Oh my gosh. U better make Helga. Gravel when she finds out the truth... Lol u hope this story will still get regular updates! Like I said before I missed it! |
starfiction123 chapter 1 . 7/21/2016 Oh my gosh! OK welcome back! First of all. Like oh my gosh! I remember reading this story YEARS ago over and over! It had everything I always wanted to SEE after the Hey Arnold Movie. I mean you nailed it my friend from beginning to end! My only qualm at first was how brutal and sharp you made Helga compared to the show but you mellowed it out beautifully in her soft moments and whoo! The events were on POINT! From the fire rescue (she really needs to say thank you for that) to the sister bonding with Olga! (It wasn't cringe worthy! That's hard to do!) To the characters of the boarders and Patakis, flawless job! To the messed up date with Lila, OOH she got busted I loved it. Tot he cookie serum and when Arnold found out she was Cecile and those kisses oh my gosh you got it downpacked! This is what every true HxA fan wants or wanted to see. And I was so happy to see this story risen from the dead when I checked my inbox! Read it from start to current again1 I hope it keeps going to the end JUST like the TJM movie developing! (P.S. how do u feel about it?) |
vampireintherain chapter 7 . 7/21/2016 this chapter made me so mad...but in a good Gerald,stupid A things go down the drain so always this story was worth waiting for the new chapter. |
Mr. Shortman92 chapter 7 . 7/21/2016 I hate Arnie SO much, he's my least favorite character in the show, especially since he loves Helga. And I can't believe he told Arnold to get out of his own room, just so HE could share it with Helga. If I was Arnold, family or not, I would have KILLED Arnie! TWICE! But not before announcing (rather passionately) that Helga's MINE, and that if anyone's going to be sleeping with her, it's ME! If I was Arnold of course. Ooooh, I HATE Arnie! That ugly little taco headed, emotionally challenged, snorting, blinking-one-eye-at-a-time, CREEP SHOW! Oh yeah, and I loved this chapter! Keep up the good work. |
Scruff the Rat chapter 7 . 7/21/2016 To be fair, Gerald's gonna a lot to answer for, especially once Arnold finds out what he told Helga. In the meantime, I sure hope what happened between our Football Head and Blonde Dynamo doesn't reach the ears of the other residents, least of all the Patakis. Poor kids have enough on their plates. |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/21/2016 I can't believe Helga just slapped Arnold |