Reviews for The Pack: Two Tales
Mega Buimuzard Y chapter 26 . 2/9/2019
Man, i've been a fan of your works for a couple years now. I don't know how many times I've read and reread Fire and Without a Sound and the first fic of The Pack. But come on! You need to update this, Hello, Doctor! And Cantabile. I know life's a drag and gets in the way by throwing writer's block and other crap that kills inspiration and motivation at ya, but you can't let that bring you down!
ThatAwfulReject chapter 25 . 1/5/2017
I have loved these stories from the beginning, and I honestly hope that you update soon. I have been following The Pack around the time the middle chapters were posted and updated and have fallen in love with these two stories
RedQueen chapter 25 . 8/14/2016
I'm kind of beginning to wonder if you died... Great chapter though, really want to know what happens next!
Joxas chapter 25 . 1/5/2016
Mandax! Please update! I finally got the app after a few years and I'm finally reading again!
The Crystal Pen chapter 25 . 9/25/2015
So finally Roxas' love drama is over. Now we can move on to more wonderful things.
The Crystal Pen chapter 23 . 9/11/2015
What a tear jerking chapter is all about.
Zolata chapter 25 . 6/1/2015
I love this story.
0Koji-chan chapter 25 . 5/29/2015
Yay~~ Your back even if it's for one chapter

And as creepy and concerning as this chapter was, it made sense and it was AMAZING!

Though I am curious, does this mean Roxas and Axel are now part Lewkan and Loup Garou?
Cresent Moon VIII chapter 25 . 5/4/2015
Whoa this chapter took me by surprise, but I loved it none the less! Awesome work!
Brairheart chapter 25 . 5/4/2015
Yay your back! I absolutely love this story!
Anon chapter 25 . 5/2/2015
Oh babies! -pulls them into my arms- just a question: do their asses self-lubricate because they're weres? Because asses can't lubricate nor are they as flexible as a vagina is, so anal sex without lube and preparation would rip the skin and hurt and the friction would not be healthy nor pleasurable. The way you write it, their assholes seem more like vaginas. Is that intended? If not, take it as constructive criticism, please! It's hard to know if you've never experienced yourself.
Dire.Knight2409 chapter 25 . 5/1/2015
YAYY! I missed this story! Great chapter, it's pretty sad that they have to die and what not but that's what makes this story so interesting! :D I seriously can't wait for the next chapter!
Kaoru-chibimaster chapter 25 . 5/1/2015
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
PANDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
*glomps*
Ohoho! So now Rufus and Seifer know! I'd love to see how Roxas explains this to them.
And dang it now I want to watch a Disney marathon. *glances at dust-covered VCR*
Yeeeaaaah, this'll take a while. XD
Okay, I'll admit, that whole mating process was kinda creepy, but I guess it was also kinda expected. And YAY! They finally sealed the deal! So now how will the pack react when they find out about Roxas' other ability? Hell, how will Axel?
Boredom is good. Boredom means more Pack, more Doctor and *hinthintwinkwink* Cantabile...?
So yeah, I'm just gonna glomp you again, soooo...
*glomps*
AsaKikuFangirl17 chapter 24 . 1/19/2015
Omg you have me dying all over the place with this story! And with The Pack and this one you have me 'aww'-ing over even couples I didn't even ship! You just make them all click perfectly! W I'm hoping you'll still update this but if you don't I can kinda understand...
But seriously if you can I'm willing to bed for an update!
Russian Prince Kai Hiwatari chapter 24 . 8/10/2014
I have to admit this story is turning out very well so far! I read and loved your first one and knew that I just had to come see the sequel too. While I wasn't expecting the TidusXZell pairing I can't say I'm too against it. I think it's mostly just a pairing I'd never considered before considering I don't know the characters all that well having never played any Final Fantasy game past number 9.

Anyway, back to the story at hand. I feel so horrible for Roxas but I'm rather glad that he did figure it out before Terra went and fought for him sort of thing. That would have just made things more then a little awkward after the fact. I can't wait to see Axel finally fight for Roxas either so it should get exciting when it gets to that part! Over all I can't wait to see how you continue this one!
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