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Your OC is a Sue chapter 16 . 1/26/2015 Okay, so that last 'Your OC is a sue' was NOT me, the original Flamer. That was just some fake-a$$ impersonator because y'know, people enjoy impersonating online. I've done it before myself. But that person two comments below IS NOT me. I love your COD stories. Sofia is cool. Shadow is even better. Please update SoaG soon because that story is the sh*t. Love, The ORIGINAL Your OC is a Sue |
Guest chapter 16 . 11/7/2014 As the other guest said your OC is a Mary-Sue. It's terrible. She's just a bad character. I don't understand how all of these people could just pass by this like its nothing. She's just... Please fix this. |
Hammer-space Handgun chapter 2 . 9/13/2014 I just started reading this and I like what I see! If I may, may take a guess at the coded message? The moment I saw it, I dropped my mouse and tried to decode it XD |
Your OC is a Sue chapter 16 . 9/4/2014 Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Mary Sue Omg, this one is even more of a Mary Sue than the other one. Omg. Poor Roach, at least the way he was portrayed in this horrible story. Poor Makarov even. To be even associated with this Mary Sue. |
Baroness Of The Dark chapter 1 . 8/29/2014 Oh shit Vladdie's sister is about to bust his balls. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2013 Oh my god u killed roach and ghost :( _ oh well I was expecting sofiaxsoap, btw add a sequal! I literally cry when I hear tf 141 - disavowed, then there's like only price left by the end of mw3 truly shocking, amazing story! |
WheresDaBeef chapter 15 . 10/13/2013 Where's the sequal?! I just got done reading this and love it! After reading about Shadow and Sophia, I've noticed that you have a talent for creating female characters that are believable, likable, and relatable! Not to mention that you never rush the story but don't drag it along either. Great job! |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/29/2013 Great story |
Angel's Anthem chapter 15 . 8/13/2013 Yeah... that was depressing... I was hoping you'd save them. |
Angel's Anthem chapter 12 . 8/13/2013 ROACH? SHE GOT WITH ROACH? OKay... well, that's fine I guess. Loved the chapter. Roach was really funny at the end. |
Angel's Anthem chapter 8 . 8/13/2013 AW man! Just when Soap started to like her... BAM! I'm really surprised by Price's reaction however... I expected to have Soap's reaction to Price... lol Still, loving it! There's potential for a make-up though! I anticipate! |
Angel's Anthem chapter 3 . 8/13/2013 Great start to Sofia! I really hope she gets with Soap... I mean, the tension... the concern... it's all there! There's potential! Imma keep reading now. Great chapter! |
Angel's Anthem chapter 2 . 8/13/2013 LOVE IT! SOAP IS SO FRICKIN' FUNNY... I look forward to more... |
Nina chapter 15 . 7/24/2013 Hmmm... SofiaxYuri sounds interesting |