Please update this is one of the best fantictions i have ever read

the story is really interesting.

Naruto is just a slightly more serious Luffy. Also did Naruto eat a space space fruit or something? Cuz he's only used spatial abilities no time ones...

Hey I just want to say that I really like your story and I really hope you'll continued with it I thought you would like help with the crew so here what I thought up:

navigator: Nefertari Vivi
sniper: baby 5
musician: Scratchmen Apoo
shipwright: Fisher Tiger
archaeologist: Aokiji
10th member: Shirahoshi or Boa Hancock

Rereading the amazing story you made and wish you would update

Ok I need to see Naruto V Crocodile round 2 also someone need to get the MVP Kid Law needs to find him staying in crater in the middle of a sandy country while a civil war is breaking out and sand is getting inside your open wounds that just screams trouble.

You maybe not be Updating this anyway more but I will say it again Kid is MVP of arc

Another thing kid MVP and deserves a bounty after this so does Law but mostly KID 2 on 1 and he still beat them heavily wounded and laid out right now but still won

Space time Naruto vs crocodile

Next

Since naruto's trying to become the pirate king and robin needs to read the polygohlys does that mean she is gonna join naruto's crew. I mean I wanted her in his crew to begin with this just adds another reason

Navigator: Monet
Sniper: Baby 5
Shipwright: Lucci
Musician: Scratchmen Apoo
Archaeologist: Violet
Love the story.

I have to say I am in love with this story. I was shock when you put the 3 captains of the " worst generation" and a warlord on Naruto's crew but that just made it hilarious. Especially with the love rivalry between nami and jewelry. I really hope that you will continue writing this story soon.

Some minor errors and Naruto's logia type abilities vanished again for the plots sake. Why would Luffy have a 30 million bounty he didn't defeat Arlong. This is why you should break Naruto away from Luffys plot and if they do have to interact in a set arc rewrite the events so that things happen for a meaning not just because Luffy did it so Naruto should too.

So this was a slightly annoying chapter for me but when i said to myself screw continuity it was slightly less cringe worthy. Main issues where about all the rookies being from the east blue but that wasn't to bad. I find your dialogues lack depth and emotion you dont expand on topics just put them there and leave it at that, it's like reading a under detailed summary of events rather than being told an immersive and detailed story. You jump from point to point with no reason behind actions. Im not pointing this out to flame you as I have found the story charming and somewhat engaging but I feel that there are issues to be adressed to improve both your writing ability and the quality of your work. A tip characters should never share the same paragraph when speaking as it confuses who it is that is actually talking each time someone bew says something give them there own paragraph you can even expand on the individual characters thoughts on whatever situation they are speaking about.