Very good I enjoyed it very much.

That was exceedingly sexy.
And made me want B&J's Cherry Garcia ice cream. With my Johnnie Walker.

Well done.

this was great i loved it

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! I can't I can't bear it ahhhh! It was disgustingly amazing! Genius!

that was hot

i love you

I adore your work! You seem to capture this coupling spot on. The verbal sparring, UST, hints of loathing... general Hotness. Yes, well done! :-)

Throughtly enjoyed this one, it didn't feel forced, just prefect! I'm also a B&J fan. :0)

Ooo, nice. Loved the ice cream bit, 'he took another mouthful and spent another few long seconds molesting it before he swallowed' - great image!

Oh dear me, this story certainley caught this girl off gaurd! Wow, I don't know how you kept them in chracter but it was perfect :) I really do hope you continue this!

Hot! I like that you mixed a bit of affection into this as well as smut. I think their personalities are compatible in the unusual sense that they are naturally at odds with each other, and yet are empathetic towards each other at the same time. It is fascinating watching them and a hell of a lot of fun to read about them when they're written like this. Bravo!

SO...since it's been a long time since Emma's gotten any does that mean she isn't on the pill at all?

wonder how they'd deal if she did get pregnant...I doubt she'd give this one up or abort it...could totally see Henry devastated if she did...wonder if Henry would figure out she's pregnant...he does seem to pick up on things others can't...kinda like Mr. Gold...I'm of the personal opinion that Gold COULD be Henry's dad...they're like two peas in a pod.

anyway totally LOVED THIS! please do more Gemma fics!

That was great! I guess I enjoyed the fact that the two of them seemed so in character and yet were able to be intimate in a way that wasn't complete hate sex as some people write. The sex itself was very hot and I really liked your descriptions.

Very hot! Are we to get a continuation? I hope so!

I already reviewed/commented on your journal, but I loved this enough to do so again. :) It was beautiful, poignant, and over all a very good read. I'm glad we have writers like you in this fandom to satiate our fixes. ;)