Wow, you do such a good job of making the characters' personalities come out. Not all fanfic authors can do that when working with TV or Movie characters and settings. wonderful job!

WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME

Definitely don't like Nicole. If she was a decent nice person, she'd report her brother to the cops. I love my brothers and sister to pieces, but I would not shelter them or help them if they were doing this kind of thing.

geez. I hate the torture and might not be able to finish, but I happen to like Seaver a lot. I wonder why people hate her and blake and kate and Will and Beth so much. I love them all. Will is a saint because nobody else could put up with mean girl JJ. Beth made Hotch laugh. Seaver is sweet and she and Reid had some nice chemistry there.

I doubt you will read this as no-one is on this site or is watching criminal minds just to go online and read fanfic, but I absolutely love every word on this page,

This guy is the worst! All of this is so sad! The only thing I really can’t see happening is Morgan beating someone with a baseball bat out of jealousy.

Loving it so far! Being afraid of electroction is completely understandable. I would feel the same way. God Reid is so strong but everyone seems bent on making him suffer! Everyone has been incredibly in character, Reid especially. I hope he will be okay! Brain damage is a terrifying concept.

SO. GOOD.

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OMG IM SO SORRY IM LAUGHING BUT.. HOTCH IS SWIMMING IN SPIDERS!XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

HOLY SHIT STICKS! IM CRYING!

OMG WHAT IS IT?!

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