Reviews for The Human Condition
juldoozicloud.com chapter 7 . 9/17/2019
Wow. Pretty lovely 3
juldoozicloud.com chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
Pretty dang elegant writing...
Guest chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
I was gripped all the way through. You’re a really good writer.
creativesm75 chapter 7 . 4/16/2018
very good
Guest chapter 7 . 1/17/2018
I hope you come back to this. It could be wonderful.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/23/2017
Oh man this is good! I hope you can continue this one day...
LeoLepidoptera chapter 7 . 8/12/2017
Please update! I love this story.
LocoAndDeep chapter 7 . 7/23/2016
My goodness... I feel like in a way they broke each other. But who wouldn't want to bury their fingers in his hair? I liked how the hunger in both of them came out in the kitchen. Too bad that they didn't make use of the counter... So, is there more or a sequel?!
LocoAndDeep chapter 6 . 7/23/2016
Oh Sherlock! What an idiot you are! She's going through hell for you and you don't have the common courtesy to at least talk to her? A bit not good man! If I were her, I would have cried myself to sleep; regardless of if he came in or not...
LocoAndDeep chapter 5 . 7/23/2016
It's interesting how he feels like he's a ghost already... I bet it will be emotionally draining to go through the funeral and pretend in front of his friends and family... I like how she tried to warm him up by taking his feet in her hands.
LocoAndDeep chapter 4 . 7/23/2016
Oh man, so heartwrenching when she says that John called. I could so see him and hear his sad voice on the line. And I almost wanted Molly to slap him for acting like he didn't care. Poor John and Molly for getting put through the ringer... Well, poor Mrs. Hudson and his parents. Mycroft had to know what Sherlock had planned... Just maybe not how he planned to die. I am glad she decided to take a portion of her bed back. If he was going to be so insensitive, she deserved to sleep in her own bed.
LocoAndDeep chapter 3 . 7/22/2016
Ohhhh, LOVE IT! Poor Molly, going to bed without finishing herself off. Don't know if I could... Surprised that she didn't try harder to protect his modesty more, but that's my problem...
LocoAndDeep chapter 2 . 7/22/2016
Molly is a saint! I just love her! Being such a good caregiver and having to put aside her emotions to help him... Ohhhh, she needs a medal or something. Maybe a special medal from the Queen via Mycroft? I hope she wraps up his ribs soon so they don't heal wrong.
LocoAndDeep chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
Oh My Gaawd! This has to be the best opener I think I have ever read! My heart breaks for Molly... Because I wish she could have given him one last embrace before he jumped; in a way to wish him luck. But then, he probably would have put her down, saying that he didn’t need luck or luck had nothing to do with it. Or maybe he wouldn't have wanted to jump after all... I love your description of how she tenderly took care of him! I would have shed some tears as well. Poor baby girl!
Bennielover-78 chapter 7 . 7/18/2015
Omg! This was so intense and the build up was excruciatingly beautiful! Your killing me though leaving it there!
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