OMIGOSH! I love this so frickin much man! You’ve got some major talent muchacho and I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING!

Very interesting, thanks for writing it

Lol. I love the story but I disagree with this chapter. Jazz is too laid-back, cool, and accepting imo to let something like this bother him. I also don't think that he'd sleep around if he's with Prowl or flirt-the latter wouldn't accept it. He'd probably tease just to annoy Prowler...lol. I can't stand an asshole Jazz-doesn't seem in his nature. :D

I've never read any Transformers slash stories, but if this one is any indication, I need to start. It's HOT! :D

Update update update update please please please.

This is my favorite chapter.

please update soon

Wow...I didn't know I'd like this as much as I do. Love the writting, depth, and emotions. You describe them very well. Please tell me there's more! Please update if there is!

this was such a awesome fic, I loved it so much, you dear writer are amazing

I love the story! Although I was pretty sure Jazz was going to be understanding, due to his usual laid back personality, but instead his starting things! I'm not sure how I feel about that, but I love that Bluestreak is on their side! I hope Prowl understands that Sides and Sunny love each other and that if he was in Sunny's place in would do the same thing Sunny did! Anyway, love it and thank you for writing! :)

good i faqing love these twins!

Your stories are so amazing! I look forward to seeing more and especially more of this one! Please update soon!

this story if off to a good start. the confrontation was well written as well. can't wait to see how this story turns out. keep up the good work. update soon please.

I really enjoyed the topic and how you are approaching the situation of their love. Sides and sunny really makes a beautiful pair, and sunny's protective personality makes this even more interesting. I am also a great fan of prowl and jazz, but i think the use of jazz as the one flirting would make the situation more tense for his higher rank. I believe prowl will not tolerate the relationship between the twins, for his logic conclusion and all the laws over it that makes forbidden. But of course the twins will fight until the end to keep together! Even fleeing from the ark and engaging the decepticons alone in some sort of ambush the seekers would plan. Anyway! I'm really hoping to see some continuity for this piece! Please update soon and moooaaarrr chapters for this great story! Your writting is amazing, keep going!

This is a really good story. I like the drama in it, and I really liked the last chapter, too.I hope you write more to it, or a sequel. Love it