I don't know why this story has such less reviews because I absolutely enjoyed each and every bit of it.

It was simply beautiful.

I really enjoyed their sweet confession. I think it was adorable..and something every girl would love to have.

Love it!

Wow! That sure was something. It was truly amazing! I LOVE IT!

Please update ASAP!

Sweet but at the part with Seth and Hillary i would have done this Hillary leans closer to seth and punches him and walks away leaving everyone stunned... then kai came along.

Hi there! Ok I must say that I agree with Hilary, I liked how Kai punched that bastard. Well done Kai!

Ok here goes some tittles (hope you like a least one): true love waits.

Love and respect.

Our promise.

Until you are ready...

Because of who you are...

Because I love you...

If we still togheter.

Ok that's all I've got for now please keep on writing! Bye!

4 some reason, i see Hilary as a doctor, or is that just me?

update soon, please

A story in a simple plot setting, Teens in high school, alcohol, a party, saving the last dance, jealousy, a fight and later a confession... While I'm not really a fan of quick fluffy romance how about tone down the fluff in the next chapter? well, that's just my opinion.

I'll help you with ideas but Aquarius Dragon already beat me to it hehehe. Nah, I'll share mine anyway. the title is 'Intimacy', right, put them in a situation where they have an argument and needed to separate from each other for a short while, some sexy man/woman came in their way and seduce them, had an affair until they feel guilty and realize they still love each other.

There, that should help you out for your next chapter :)

Once thing that bothers me is the (A/N) insert, I know it may be not intentional but these inserts usually ruins the reading mood in the story.

Take care and stay creative :)

Hey... Nice first chapter... And so long... Loved it! Look forward to next chapter and what they are all doing. I'll try and think of some ideas...but I'm not very creative (hence why I have no stories of my own-well I do but I won't post em cos they suck lol) anyway great job on first chapter!

:-) X

That was pretty fluffy. This is actually my first time reading something like this, though. And I gotta say, a pretty long chapter.

The stetting is simple enough. Young girls - and women in general - can easily relate, because some time in their pasts, they all had to confront an asshole. Also, sexually charged boys generally tend to be assertive in that age, so, that part was well thought out as well.

That and of course the typical female jealously. Like how they were gossiping that she doesn't deserve that much attention. I kinda laughed at that part.

The long chapter had a nice flow, albeit some parts felt that they could be tweaked up a bit, but then again, for the simple setting I think it is forgivable.

All aside, this setting is nice, it could have been great if you took this intimacy word to the next level. Like, you could have explored extra marital affairs? Unrequited love? etc etc. I have plenty of ideas with mature, grown characters.

Anyhow, great effort for your first M rated fic. Don't let anything discourage you. You have great potential.

Take care.

Woohoo! You updated. I never thought I would get to read this story so soon.

I absolutely loved this chapter. The Seth guy got what he deserved. He shouldn't have treated Hilary like that. I'm so happy Kai and Hilary confessed their love for each other. Aww! Hils is so lucky to have Kai as her lover. He is so caring and respecting towards Hilary. I hope they stay together until their marriage.

Looking forward for the next chapter and the other vampire story as well.

Wow I am impressed! That was seriously long and really good. I really enjoyed it and hope your future projects are just as amazing!