You are a very skilled writer. I enjoyed every word of this piece and nearly died when I found the last word. You have captured Shikamaru and Naruto very well; even though their personalities are not exactly as they appear in the anime (at the point I have reached at least) I can easily imagine them developing along these lines. I want to devour your interpretation of them. Bravo.

i loved it though i would love to read the meeting i can just picture it now

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I LOVE this kind of Shika! It's just way too cute. I wish this was more than just a one-shot! Great job with this.

It's so freakin sexy that I had to read it twice just to make sure that it wasn't just my imagination that someone chould make foreplay this amazingly yummy~