Reviews for Dementor's Kiss
mumphie chapter 14 . 7/23
I enjoyed your story, and hope that I will find the sequel! :)
Azure Shine chapter 14 . 6/9
wow this is interesting but i have many questions. are neville and hagrid is traitor too? ron is blood traitor coz his family like muggles, it not bad thing, are harry agree with hating blood traitor too? so this is gray harry, it okay to revenge and be cruel to his traitors but become little evil to innocent people (example muggle beside dursley) too?
Azure Shine chapter 3 . 6/9
wow i dont like evil Dumbledore even thought i know dumby is manipulator and his greater good is bad. but this is interisting
Bronze chapter 6 . 5/11
I like this Lucius Malfoy! He really knows how to hurt those three worthless muggles! Of course, only two are smart enough to realize it. I can see that Dudley's gonna go real far in life. If he lives long enough. Oh, hey that's right! He just lost his favorite toy! Harry's not there anymore for him and his gang to chase around! Now he never loos all that weight!
Bronze chapter 4 . 5/11
Having just checked your profile page I hope you're out of college or uni. I mean, after six years? Of course, you could be going for a true multi-year degree and thus still in school. But as I've read in some stories, So not important. However, if you're out and working, I pray you're one of the fortunate ones who don't get this Corvid-19 virus and have a job deemed vital. Good luck and maybe someday you'll pick up your stories where you left off or restart them.
Zandaino-Nova-Ari chapter 6 . 4/27
I don’t feel comfortable with calling these ‘chapters’ chapters, they’re more along the lines of scenes or acts from a play with how short they are
Tenjo chapter 3 . 3/28
The changes you’re making are too drastic... you mean to tell me Harry, a boy with keen observation skills and at least some knowledge failed to realise that literally everything about Dumbledore, Voldemort and pretty much everything else was bullshit? So why did Voldemort help perpetuate those obvious lies? Why were the Malfoy’s such shit people until the very end?

None of it makes sense. I can understand AU stories, or stories where very subtle things have been missed by all, but this is just too far fetched. I’d be more inclined to believe you if you told me Harry was a girl, which he’s clearly not.
Raven Evans-Black chapter 14 . 3/4
When will the sequel be posted
Dolphin13 chapter 10 . 2/1
Dear Author, this chapter(10) has parts bolded that aren't book quotes. I don't know if this was on purpose or simply slipped by, but I thought I'd bring it to your attention. Other than that I love the book so far! Also I'm looking forward to seeing a female Blaise in action!
Dolphin13 chapter 3 . 1/31
I'm a bit weary about Tom being his grandfather, but you already hooked me with the all the deities, timetravel, and evil Dumbledore. Good, suck in your reader before throwing the crackier crack at them! Very nice.
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 14 . 1/28
Great story sorry to see it end. Thanks for sharing!
Merlin ancestor chapter 1 . 10/18/2019
This...its just terrible. Lmao, I'm sorry
Emma chapter 6 . 12/27/2018
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, REVENGE IS SWEET.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
Okay. Haha, cheers!
Katherine Rosalie Hale chapter 14 . 10/18/2018
AAAAAAHHHHH! Are you kidding me?! You left it right there? Ugh. Love this story! Well written and amazing! Better have finished it or I'm going to hit you with a halibut. LOL!
Natsuki D chapter 14 . 8/27/2018
Did you make a sequel to this story? If so is love to read it.
Loved the story _
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