Ugh I loved this.

I love the emotion you displayed here. And I really like Lip at the end, I can definitely picture him react like that in the show. Wonderful!

This is just so beautiful! I love it!

Aww poor Ian fell fucking hard. loved it.

These Gallaghers-they really make crappy love choices. Nice parallel between Lip and Ian, both loving something/someone they'll probably never have.

Liiiiiiiiiip! The way you write the brothers is killing me slowly. I mean obviously I like your Ian/Mickey too but I am such a sucker for reading about how Lip reacts to Ian/Mickey and you provide beautifully.

Again, an absolutely astounding piece of writing. You've got the best writing I've seen in a while. I just love your stories.

Please never stop writing Shameless stories. Especially Ian/Mickey stuff. I just...love everything about the way you write them; you have everything from setting to characterization to pacing down perfectly. I could clearly envision this as a scene of the show playing before my eyes. It was raw and realistic and emotional, and just incredibly well written. I'd love to see you write a longer, multi-chaptered Shameless story. It would be incredible, no doubt. But yes! I love your work. So keep it up :)

Please. Just keep writing. Your stories are like crack to me. A lot of the time when I read something I adore, there's always a stand out part for me. One bit that I will pick out and love with all of my heart. But when I read your stories, I can't pick anything out because basically every single sentence you write makes my heart want to burst. I love the appearance by Lip, as well, because if there's someone who knows all about falling for their fuck buddy, it's Lip :) and I love the relationship that Ian and Lip share, so that was really lovely :)

This was a beautiful piece of writing. You really captured the characters of Ian and Mickey and even Lip in a small amount of words, and I really enjoyed reading it. I kind of think this story is begging for a sequel, but that could just be because I want to read of your vision for these characters. Either way thanks for writing this!

Your writing just gets better and better. This was so full of pathos,it was haunting.