Good. Very good!

Cuteeeeeeeee! Very well written too :)

This was absolutely lovely and really well written. I like how you describe the different change in Sherlock's eye colour and John's reactions to it. This deserves a sequel, I think. Anyway, awesome story and great work. :)

So lovely!

Aww! Love the fluff of this :)

Oooh! Great story too.

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

awww, that was so cute!

Great story ;)

Thank you !

i like your vivid description of his eyes, the way they change colour, and how john is fascinated and distracted by this.

i think i saw some minor tense errors, but nothing that distracts when reading.

That was quite wonderful. Love that Sherlock is the focus of a study, for once.

This was utterly sweet!

Seems like Sherlock sometimes is oblivious to the obvious too. Although I never doubted that he proved that point before but ignoring the obvious with John certainly is a first XD

I liked that!

This was really charming. I love how the tables are turned, with John observing and hypothesising and theorising rather than Sherlock.

I've just given up trying to classify Sherlock's (and Benedict Cumberbatch's) eye colour.

That was beautiful. Sherlock's eyes have fascinated me since "A Study in Pink". They really have a remarkable colour: sometimes gray, sometimes more blue.

Brilliant work. To the point and deep. You have a very good John voice.

My face hurts from smiling.

THANKYOU. I needed that, I've been reading angst all day.

That man's eyes are quite the mystery...aren't they? Just when you think you know what color they are, THEY GO AND CHANGE ON YOU. I can see why that would bother John.

Keep writing, you are good.

Jana

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