I love this story so much i will always hold it dear to my heart Dx I wish you could have given us a detailed summary of how it ends and how alfred was rescued oh and why Alice gave me the creeps xd

This story really good and you were doing so well. I hope you update and continue this story! 8 - D

please tell me that you still continuing this! Please! Otherwise I'll be so sad!

this story is pure gold and I love everything about it (altho sometimes you make Arthur a bit too dick xD)
so please please continue iiitt QAQ our two men havent got their happy end yet!

Please update soon! Please please!

Oh gosh. What a wonderful little treasure I've stumbled across. Although it's not been updated in quite some time, please know that I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I've found myself bursting into little tiffs of giggling laughter at some points. So thank you.

This story is superb. the plot and the characters are so engaging..however Alfred is the one I find the most interesting. I'am curious to know more about him. I know he came from a poor and underprivileged family but it has been hinted that he is some kind of genius..bordering on frightening. I guess I will just have to wait and see :3

So Alfred has been captured, and now Kiki has gone off to rescue her. Ah, poor Alfred, I presume there's no restrooms in the prison. Ppfptttt ahahhahaa I see a pirates reference, Mr. Sparrow. More please!

oh WoW! nooo Alfred :'( at least it does not seem like his life is in imminent danger..but well that could change It's going to take a lot more than a little bit of seductive 'charm' to get himself out of this, or maybe not Lol Alfred is just full of surprises XD Arthur hmmm I don't know what to think, will he help or make matters worse :/ oooh my and just remembered about Ivan, what if he hears about the kidnapping...

Awesome update! XD Yay! Your bringing Iceland in! Haha, I'll be looking forward to that chapter. :3

Sighs
I missed this fanfic :D

Well throughout the chapter I was waiting to see what I was supposed to notice. In fact I was worried I'd gone past it. Of course it hit me at the end and I'm very flattered!
I laughed when Arthur made that guy captain. I see what you did there: "Mr Sparrow" XD
So I'm assuming Uyen is Vietnam? I love her, she's not in many fanfics and I just love how many minor characters you've managed to include in this fic. Oh and Wy. I like the name you gave to Wy: I think Peggy really suits her.
Thanks for that little reference at the end and update soon please!

-Neko

Oh my that was a quite fun and interesting chapter! Alfred gets kidnap and other crap!
I wonder how Alfred can get out! If he gets out and THEn Arthur and Kiki arrive and they realize that they went all the way just to be told Alfred has escaped! When Alfred gets back alive I want to Alfred and Arthur to has a cheesy romatic moment Pfft ohhh Kiku likes Alfred hehehe

Well then this was a intresting chapter, it gave the feel of the pirates of the carribbean though. Also were there insearts from a letter in this chapter?

OMG OMG AN UPDATE! AN UPDATE! YES! IM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW! LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

Vietnam and Korea? It's a good day! So what's up with Yao? Alfie is pretty! Is it like the Asian beauty? Where you have to have super fair skin, tiny feet, be petite and curvy deal? Because then I could understand why Alfred could be considered "ugly", but other than that, I got nothing. so it's early in the morning and my grammar is atrocious but I'm very glad you updated and I hope you do again soon. Stay awesome!

You should involve Iceland somewhere in this story! He can becone friends with Alfred or something! • And you can pair him with Hong Kong! Sorry that's my OTP. . . v.v but yeah! I love your story!