OMG you should totally write more this was awesome hilarious and hot all at the same time

Awwwwwww poor Hermione! Great job and great twist ending I love it :)

;_; poor hermione!

Very amusing D I like the twist.

Were you planning to write any more? I'd like to see something like this, written in your style, expanded.

This is good, but needs to more than a one-shot. Is Hermione in love with Luna? Is that the first time she's even thought about her like that and is as shocked by that as anything else?

Inquiring minds need to know. ;)

Wonderfully written, especially for your first. Very intimate and a good read, keep it up, and be sure to focus on Luna's characteristics :)

Pepalaria,

Wowww, your story is sooooo good! Please write more! I know this is shameless, but would you mind reviewing my story too? I would love to know what you think of it! Thank you so much!

Natalily~