Publish it please and tell us the name!

Squeals indeed

Sweet. Baby. Jesus. That was just, wow. I applaude you and your skills you are one talented person. Well done.

Holy mother of grail...MARRY ME! This is the most perfect, most brilliant, most sexiest, most magnificent Johnlock story I have ever read; it was beautifully written, the plot and smut so fizzing perfect and smexy, and just outstanding in every way. Keep up the brilliant work! Also, I love that you put Sherlock as dominant, I have been waiting forever for this kind of story! So thank you so so much 3
With love,
LYF666

God, this was amazing.

Publish it!:D

Nosebleed.

Scorching perfection
Thanks for sharing

Love this story!

Omg! This was amazing :D please please please write more !

Oh! Mah! Gawd! There be some smut that makes my toes curl and my spine tingle! Practically the whole past two and a half chapters worth! Honestly LOVED it! :-D :-D I read plenty of stories with s/m or bdsm and dom/sub. I don't always go for it either when it is too cruel and controlling or just too out of character (the whole pet/Master premise bugs me a little). But This story is different! Sherlock is dominating but not cruel (not really ;) ) and not too much OOC. Plus this is a much more give and take relationship, John submits but also gives back equally! It's like a perfect blend of their needs and wants for and with each other! AND Really, Truly, I SOO mean this...THAT is some DAMN Good Smut! :-D I see a very bright future for this relationship! And I will look for that sequel! Thanks soo very much for a GREAT story! ;) :-D :-D

Ohhh...I do hate it when John has hurt feelings! But I actually love how you had Sherlock imply that it was just a physical infatuation that would soon pass...JUST to help test and deduce John's true feelings! ;) :) A little bit cruel on Sherlock's part but also something Sherlock would do. And THEN you had Sherlock go and FIX it! :-D :-D :-D Love!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PUBLISH IT

FAN!

Oh. My. GOOOOD. *gasps for air as she's been left lying on her bed in a sexually frustrated heap* Shit, that was...fucking amazing. I was so turned-on at some points that I swore I might cry, haha. But then I also felt my eyes well up a time or two at how sweet and tender Sherlock and John can be to one another. :') I love how you interspersed the sex with the more tender and emotional side of John and Sherlock's relationship. The two aspects balance each other out and work together very nicely. I love how the story started with wanking in the closet and the misunderstanding that that lead to. I do have some grammatical quips with all of this - misspelled words, changing tense in the middle of sentences, and sometimes being a bit confusing with male pronouns where it was hard to tell if you were referring to Sherlock or John at any given moment; I'd suggest replacing some his/he/him's with names to make things a bit clearer, and a good beta should always help with these things - but your overall writing and the story you wove were good enough that, for once, grammatical errors weren't enough to take away from the overall work. I'm a self-described grammar nazi and a journalism major so that's a pretty big accomplishment with me. Congrats. :) hehe. I would definitely like to read your sequel fic with the phone sex. I do love some good dirty talk, especially when I can imagine it being spoken in Sherlock's gorgeous purr of a voice. Mmm. ;) My final verdict: bravo on a job well done! Now, after reading this, I believe I must go and tend to certain...things. xP