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Brilliant. But, I hate to tell you, but the head held on by the string already exists.

I read a horror story just like that! Ya know, without the advantage of being well written, Hetalia related, or a RoChu pairing, but HIS FRICKIN HEAD ROLLED OFF! AND OF COURSE I HAD TO READ IT ST NIGHT! XD
Good job! Very nice take on RoChu!

OMIGOD! That was amazing! I cried when his head fell of cause my ex-girlfriend was my Russia cosplayer and I was China. I knew what was going to happen before Russia took the scarf off. I read a story like this a couple of years ago. It was about a girl who always had a ribbon around her neck. A boy fell in love with her and kept asking that question. She told him she would tell him that she would tell him when they were old and when she was dying she showed him and died. Just curious, are you familiar with the story? Anyways, it was absolutely amazing!

it was to cute I love it! :)

I remember the story this is based on. It was about a girl who always had a green ribbon around her neck. Even after she got married she never removed it. Finally when she was about to die, she asked her husband to untie it. When he did her head roled off.

Ahahaha! I cracked up at that twist. xD This was very nicely written, and in-character too. Good job!

Well that was annoying I wanted Ivan's head to stay off XD I did like his little threat though it was cute

I gasped when I read that Russia's head rolling but than I laughed at the happy ending. Either way I enjoyed it. And by the way,this sounds similer to a story I heard when I was younger. About a woman having a ribbon around her neck and when it was removed, her head fell off. Is it based off that? Did the story have a name?

You should have just deleted this story. You are obviously writing Rochu out of spite. Nothing worse than pretty much being forced to write about a pairing you don't like.

Nevertheless, I thank you for your attempt at atonement. I hope you give Rochu a chance someday. Best regards.

This story is well-written and it does have nice plot. Well, just to let you know, changing a pairing may disappoint some readers, especially to those who are serious with their OTP.. I am not a RusLiet fan and I don't hate that pairing because of this story, but its just made me shocked to see how my favorite pairing were twisted into the one that i never like.

*sigh* I thought it would be ended with the pairing which I expect from reading your tag before I start reading this story, you should at least put some warning about RusLiet pairing on your tag or else...it might offend more of another non-RusLiet readers especially Rochu lovers. It is not like I want to insult you about this story, but I would like to say that this story's more like offending and deceiving readers like me at the first time.

I am sorry if this message kind of making you miserable. Kindly hope that you will be more considerate the next time you make a new story.

I skimmed parts of this story and read your Author's Notes, which is what I usually do before I decide whether to read a fanfiction or not. This means by the time I read, I pretty much know what happened, and you had already made the changes. I read the reviews too, and quite a few of them were mean and rude.

I liked the dialogue and how you showed the relationships in your fic. You did well on the surprise, too, though it may be unpleasant for readers. For example, the last part of the dream disturbed and scared me.

It's good you listened to the suggestions about putting only Russia as the character. I think reviewers were reacting out of shock and disappointment towards the ending. I understand the feeling, but that doesn't give them the right to attack and take it out on you. Original books, movies, and games have sudden twists and unpleasant surprises, too. People should understand that we all have different preferences and opinions, and express their disappointment politely. I know I'm in no position to say that since I'm flaming you right now, and I apologize for that.

I thought of a few more things you could do to lower your chances of flames. You could probably be more clear and specific in the warning. I know some people like surprises, but I think in fanfiction, people prefer warnings over surprises. Here are some examples you could probably add in the warning:

-"Unpleasant twist" or "shocking twist"

-"Unpleasant surprise"

-"Ending might be disturbing"

Things people usually put in warnings are character deaths, mpreg, abuse, and graphic content.

When I checked ffn update this morning I found this fiction has changed its tags. It is really a good idea to divide the story into two chapters. I didn't even think of this way!

I am sorry for all the harsh reviews you got. I am sure you have no intention degrading Rochu, in fact, the first chapter was quite cute. It is just difficult to handle two parings of a same character in a single story. I have read flames under almost every fanfiction of this type, no matter how hard the author tries to reason the change of feelings of character or clearly warn reader ahead, they still end up offending half of their readers who is serious with OTPs.

Anyway I hope there will be no more flames in reviews! Although I am not quite sure get the newest reviews there, I hope it is not starting new arguments. :(

I KNEW IT !I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! thats so fun~

I have now read the reviews~! *puts on glasses sophisticatedly*

Ahem.

She f**ing warned you you bunch of baka. I suggest you get over it. Most of you all are whiney little pu$$ies anyway, b!tches didn't even have the courage to sign the f*ck in. Get over it. You guys if you don't like twists, GET THE F*** OVER IT AND DON'T READ THESE TYPES OF. STORIES. SHE CLEARLY WARNED YOU, AND IF SHE'D HAVE PUT LITHUANIA IN THE TAG, IT'VE GIVEN THE STORY AWAY. Also, after reading the reviews, I noticed something. I feel it is nessacary for me to say, that over half of you have improper grammar and spelling. True fans know how to spell "Liet", sweeties. It's not "l-i-t-e". I suggest that instead of wasting your time flaming this author and making her feel bad about a perfectly good story, you whiney little flame-whores go and read a dictionary, or actually pay attention in Language Arts class. - Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a life, and unlike you, I'd like to do something worthwhile t improve it. And, hey~! If you want to talk to me about this lovely letter, all you kind, sweet, little bastards, go ahaead and PM me. That is, if you're not to chicken to sign in.

Love you little b!tches~!

Dream~