Cliff hanger but thanks for the read

I like how you experiment with different genres and

Also, how are you feeling? Better, I hope! Do they know why you had the seizure?

Okay, aside from the fact that I love Lisbon and hate that she's dead in this chapter, I really liked this. Enough that I think it would make a very interesting full-on fic. :D

Okay, that's just wrong on so many levels. The writing is, as ever, impeccable, but no! Not my Lisbon!

Hmm, that was kind of sad...but then Mentalist fic usually has an underlying layer of sadness, doesn't it?

Ugh, super creepy! Why am I reading this at midnight in my dark room? I really hope the next one is uplifting to make up for this...

I never thought I'd say this about a zombie story, but I liked that! Just the perfect amount of levity and logic to a seemingly unbelievable topic.

Wow.

I would love to see you continue in this 'verse.

Aw, how do you make something so hopeless and depressing somehow uplifting? That's skill.

Maybe...

Must be (god, you won't get that, but I had to say it- it's from a Japanese show). Quite like little vignettes such a this.

I so love these off the wall scenarios you have going. It spices up life!

Ooh, that was so interesting! Except now I want to hear the whole tale!

But I was sad that Cho got killed off. I love Cho.

Creepy...

Loved it! And I'm sad to know you've finished this one...hope you write another one sometime! :)

I certainly wouldn't mind going for a second round, especially because I enjoyed writing my pairing. (However, I'm not sure our sanities can take much more? ;)) I do have to thank the challenge though for allowing me to become so much more comfortable in writing different genres. (It also allowed me to come up with a million different projects that I'll have to come back to one day.)

Continuing to the piece: I loved the concept of time travel when I suggested the genre, but I honestly had no idea how the idea would turn out. You did absolutely amazing with this genre, and the heartbreaking realization that he had been put into some kind of hell instead of having a good thing, was absolutely heartbreaking.

I kinda would like to see if he finds a way to reverse it, but I love the way I can imagine several outcomes versus what might actually happen. :D