Thoroughly enjoyed this. Sad it's not finished.

Of course dying changes Harry’s life. He died for goodness’ sake!

NOOOOOOOOOOOO GROOOOOOSSS

Excellent job.

Never apologize for stopping free work.

Hopefully, you can return. If not, thanks for how many interesting chapters you gave us

Interesting back story.

Struggling with your Bella but explanation is reasonable

Good job.

But no sympathy (ever) for Snape

Good.

You actually accomplished lot. The follow up with Draco, the potions class, and the relationship. Plus Harry’s classes. Guess Ginny and Luna are stuck with Snape. Deliberate or just not their owl year.

Liked it. Interesting set of rules. Great job with duels and underlying politics.

Glad to see Narcissa get in a shot.

Nice seeing Dumbles accept need for punishment.

You have kept the Weasleys tolerable, especially Ron. Good job.

Great chapter. But if ever re-edit, put up a trigger warning for assault.

Liked it a lot. Harry should bring Neville and Luna. If only to let latter mess with their minds

Hmm, h still has to explain it to Neville. Hopefully loss of magic will help.

Thanks on the Ginny issue. It really wouldn’t work for three of them.

Love how changes matter.

Big mistake to include Ginny.

Hermione might share but Ginny never will.

Luna would have made better choice

Greats story. Shows the damage inflicted by Sirius’s death. Really shows danger of canon to anyone’s psyche.

You are a talented writer because you set the scenes and let’s characters react to it.

I like it a lot and not just because you don’t make same mistake as canon. Like your Harry having a brain. Same goes for Ron. Never a question with Hermione.

Nice job with Harry’s folks.

Really looking forward to rest

Oh how I wish you could have completed your delightful tale. I was having too much fun then it was over. (Insert long sigh here)