Reviews for To Wound a Lion
MadHatter1982 chapter 45 . 10/7/2019
Perfect ending to an incredible story. I got to read it straight through since you had long since finished the story. I truly enjoyed your author's notes. NONE of your chapters were boring. Your notes managed to lighten some of the darker chapters, thank you for that. I hope you're well. Thank you for writing this.
DionysusDaughter chapter 5 . 2/5/2019
I can't believe...why would... I just...Ron needs to...WHY WOULD RON DO THIS!? *says while sobbing*
DionysusDaughter chapter 2 . 2/5/2019
I've read so many fanfictions where someone's getting raped and abused and finally leaves this person for someone so much better and I'm wondering why the FUCK this is a thing I hate abuse and rape but I like the endings where they get with a better person so I plow through it waiting for the good part
Guest chapter 31 . 9/19/2018
Don't call an annoying person Hunny, it's the name of someone from Ouran HighSchool Host Club shortened, and he's kinda awesome, and you don't want them to think you're praising them. Sorry, I just really like Hunny, he's a great character, even if they do underestimate him a lot. [Though between you and me Takashi is my favorite. Not be confused with Tamaki, no I'm talking about Takashi Morinozuka, his name shortened is Mori. (Hunny, is short for Haninozuka, his first name is Mitsikuni)]
Also note, that in Japan, apparently, you're introduced by your last name, so there it would be Morinozuka Takashi, and Haninozuka Mistikuni.]
Anon chapter 18 . 8/23/2018
While I'm not fond of the Snape/Twins interactions (a little too weird for me, especially with the age gap), I'll live with it. Other than that, it was good.
I know okay chapter 45 . 3/14/2016
I'm glad they got a happy future.

My only constructive criticism is you could really use a beta. It's been some time since you wrote this so maybe you have one. I kept wanting to fix it because I used to be one for someone in another fandom. Of course I helped her every day along with my own writing. Now that I'm older I have far less time to keep up on all of it.
I know okay chapter 44 . 3/14/2016
I'm glad he got to thank Colin.
I know okay chapter 43 . 3/14/2016
The twins part was hot.
I know okay chapter 41 . 3/14/2016
Good riddance.
I know okay chapter 39 . 3/14/2016
Throw him out to the Muggles when the sentence is done.
I know okay chapter 38 . 3/14/2016
Well, I can honestly say I wondered why you would put the professor and the twins together in the first place, but now I know.
I know okay chapter 36 . 3/14/2016
Destroy them.
I know okay chapter 35 . 3/14/2016
Poor little guy.
I know okay chapter 32 . 3/13/2016
Please don't fall for it.
I know okay chapter 30 . 3/13/2016
Yikes! Most people don't fall for the abuser, they fall for the person they pretended to be in the first place. That might spell trouble for Colin.
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