| Reviews for Out of Jelousy at first |
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   Percabeth.Keeper chapter 1 . 5/20 Very nice. You are amazing at describing things. Some people that reviewed said that they wanted less about the kiss, but I think it was very nice. |
| a chapter 1 . 5/18 love it but next time make emily go to aarons house when there 18 and make them have sex |
| Taylor swift chapter 1 . 3/3 How cute, I love it |
| autumn chapter 1 . 1/10/2019 it was good but i would say be a bit less descriptive with the kiss |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2018 I love this story. Would you like to write more stories about Emily Windsnap plz? |
| Nancymer172 chapter 1 . 6/4/2018 I know you havent written on this in 6 years but there needs to be a future fix where Aaron and Emily have a baby with very in detail pregnancy completely made up of course becuse no one knows what a mermaid pregnancy is like. Lol |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2018 It's soooooooo good! Plz continue |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2018 Make out not mainframe |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2018 Good but why r they mainframe out on their 2 kiss |
| Edie chapter 1 . 4/7/2018 Its a really nice one! keep up the good work, and i hope you make another one soon! |
| bumblybeez chapter 1 . 4/2/2018 I read the first book and didn't realise there was a series OMG |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 This was so good I wish the book was like this |
| Loveemily windsn chapter 1 . 7/2/2017 Love It please continue to write the rest of the chapter if you can |
| loveEmily windsn chapter 1 . 7/2/2017 Love the story please do more Emily windsnap books |
| batgirl13 chapter 1 . 11/3/2016 Pleas do a nother chap |
