Aw, poor Ryoko. Pretty good introspection though.

Wow! I loved the depth of emotion here! I could really feel for her! Good job!

-rm/bo

Wow, that was excellent. You captured ryoko's feelings beautifully! I still believe that Tenchi truly wants Ryoko! .

awww... that's sad... very good, though, very good

tell me, please, that Ryoko never let Hotsuma see that she didn't love him. If he thinks that she loves him, then, that's ok. A good fic, anyway.

That is spectacular! Write more ::holds out the FRYING PAN OF DOOM:: or you know the concequences!

Wow. Bitter, hmmmm? But just what I'd expect, actually. Ryoko is a and knows it (though she's still my absolute FAVORITE !), and this little work really rings true. Good writing.

(Starts crying.)That was so beautiful!(sniffles)

gr...DIE SAKUYA! DIE! hehe...nvm. Actually, I should be saying BE DESTROYED, SAKUYA! BE DESTROYED! with all that censorship nonesense. ::sigh:: andyway, it was EXCELENT, ryoko rules, you guys know the drill. Anywhoot, very nicely written. Also, if I'm allowed to make a request? Could you write something where Tenchi and Ryoko actually get together? That would be really sweet! thankies!

Wonderful! *sobs* That was beautiful! So many tearjerkers around...awesome, saddening work! Sayonara! Plz write more TM! fics!

Ohh! that was so SAD! But it was beautifully written, and I really feel sorry for the poor girl. :( As always Yimh, you did an amazing job. I want you're muse! You're so GOOD! I really don't know anything about these characters, but I can totally sympathize!

I'll be the first to admit, I *don't* like Ryoko. But I liked this! You made her seem more human, more vulnerable, and less of a monster than everyone else. Good one!

Who wants to help me kidnap Sakuya to keep her from bothering Tenchi and Ryoko?

wow...

-_-DIE SAKUYA!*sniff**sniffles*cry**cries*Sob*Sobs*DIE SAKUYA!YOU JERK TENCHI!-.-;;;Hotsuma has no chance wiv Ryoko,trust me. Inncoence my ass! lol a lil 'more innocent' than Ryoko I suppose...good story,write more or die :)